who was the killer?

Ugh, what a waste of a good story! Seriously, you had me going until you started breaking the fourth wall. Your first chapter was very well executed (pun intended), but it just went downhill from there until this chapter, which was pretty atrocious.

I do suggest you reread and redo it later on, since it still is a great premise and you had a lot going for it.

my god! i 3 the story but u had me freaking out at the end of the last chapter! gosh, u need to make a horror movie! :)

oh my god! please update soon! i want to see what happens next

I readed this on the3eds and like it

im glad you put it here!

10/10!

Poor Kevin. I hope Eddy will be okay.

Hey update soon, I like it.