Reviews for Turn to Stone
Jenny chapter 51 . 8/16/2019
I’m just stuck on the fact that Edward never brok confidentiality the facts given were already known to the prosecution. He connected the dots and I realize it varies by state to an extent but it was never a breach.

I’m also stuck on the fact that Edward absolutely would have had to testify and Aro would have supenoed him and made it look like a witch hunt and vengeance because of what happened to Angela. I don’t see anyway James actually would have been convicted. It was a great plot but not very realistic in terms outboutcome.
vampirelady13 chapter 29 . 6/29/2019
Good chapter i am glad that there both making progress. I hope Bella gets her justice. Thank you
vampirelady13 chapter 28 . 6/29/2019
Again why are you making Charlie out to be a dumb cop. He could found all this out. Why is Port Angles police department is letting Tanya over see a relatives case. Looks like Bella can sue the Port Angles police department.
vampirelady13 chapter 24 . 6/28/2019
First off I love Cynthia your story is good so far. But I think that Charlie being a cop would have tore up the world to find the rapist. I don't understand why you have him doing nothing he is a cop. If it were me I would have been in Port Angles police dept. Throwing a fit till they actually did something.
RubyDee chapter 52 . 6/22/2019
Thank You so much for sharing Turn To Stone with us. Lawyers can be an enemy of the people or a knight in shining armor. In the beginning I had such a problem with how James could remain a free man in society but his attorney did his job well in representing the bastard. One can only imagine the absolute grief that Angela lived with in the aftermath of the trial. Edward learned, only too well, the lesson of every action has a reaction. That case sure turned Edward's life around in questioning and loathing this aspect of his profession. Enter Bella, or as I like to think of her, Edwards salvation. Oh how I cried when we learned her story. I loved how Rosalie, Emmett and Carlisle worked with Edward to right the nightmare that James left in his wake ... not only in his past but in the future. Thank you for giving Bella (and Edward) the means to heal to move forward to their future. :)
Guest chapter 52 . 12/14/2017
Did Bella ever find out about Edward and Lauran?
Guest chapter 28 . 12/14/2017
Would you really have your readers believe that a car dealer would say stupid shit like that? REALLY? They would NEVER try to talk someone OUT of a deal. And alittle odd that the price is $38,700 something and they only offer a 700 dollar discount. They would go a lot less then that (thousands less) and to have Edward actually turn down a discount? What are you a fucking moron? A story should be believable! That whole chapter read like a kid wrote it. Don't worry wisdom will come with age, if your lucky.
Guest chapter 21 . 12/14/2017
Bella is so weird.. With this whole its my fault...all my fault. I want to fucking slap that whore. You know most people don't act like that when bad shit happens. They KNOW they have been wronged. They KNOW whos fault it really is. So I just don't understand Bella. I don't understand people that cant deal with their shit. I just don't get.
Guest chapter 20 . 12/14/2017
What? Um no. I'm pretty sure double jeopardy only applies when someone is actually convicted of the crime or if they are trying to retry the case with the same evidence.

So if they have new evidence they can in fact try to convict him again. But they cant bring him to trial again with the same evidence if hes already been acquitted. And if he was convicted they cant bring him back to court even with new evidence to try to get a longer sentence.

So double jeopardy doesn't apply in this case because Bellas testimony is NEW EVIDENCE, they can try to convict him but it would be harder now even with the new testimony because their star witness is dead.
Guest chapter 15 . 12/14/2017
Bellas phobia is a bit much don't you think?
Guest chapter 8 . 12/14/2017
Edward said that his secretary was a professional...I have read NOTHING that proves that. The way she talks to her boss is wrong. She should be fired. And honestly shes a VERY unneeded character.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/14/2017
I find Edwards behavior highly unlikely because by his own admittance he has picked up ALOT of women. One every night he says...so why is he acting like hes never been with a girl?
Guest chapter 3 . 12/14/2017
so let me get this straight...Edward was a whore before he witnessed angela kill herself. But since the death hes kicked it up a notch and now fucks a different woman EVERY night. Seriously? That's ALOT of woman. And why does he call them sluts and whores? HE is the whore!

If hes been fucking someone new each night for that last 2 years...that's over 700 women...add that to the number he already had which sounds like its rather high since the man has NO MORALS AT ALL.

That's one really gross Edward. How many stds has he had? I bet at least a few of his one night stand ended up pregnant. How many bastards does he have? Does he have an std right now?
Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2017
Bella is a fucking moron...ya please let the nasty used up drunk man whore come back...soon!
This Edward is a total piece of shit.
Bevey99 chapter 52 . 5/19/2017
Ups, downs, hot, cold, laughing, crying. Yep this took us to all those spots. Good read. Thanks for writing.
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