Definitely do a sequel- excellent story!

I love this story, but I hate how manipulative Alice was and the fact that Bella let her get away with it.

Thanks for the great story!

lol its been long since u updated but plz write second to this story or write something like it I loved this story! you are an amazing writer !

Update?

This is stretching far too much

Bella's reaction is a little too calm. But that's Bella, so.

Good chapter. But I'll be honest, this is moving far too slow. If Bella still doesn't understand that Edward likes her than she's stupid, really. And Edward should just confess already.

Great chapter, I just wish things moved a bit faster between these two.

I just want them to kiss and admit that they love each other! Great chapter.

Alice is so amazingly evil. Love her.

I don't like Edward's attitude. First off, I don't think he'd run away from her like this, especially down the stairs knowing how accident prone she is. And he expects to be forgiven just because he said sorry. It doesn't work that way. Plus Bella shouldn't have forgiven him so easily. And you can't just pull someone into a kiss if you fall. That last scene was a bit unbelievable.

What the hell is Edward doing! I feel as frustrated as Bella rn and Alice. Anyway Good chapter. Thank you.

What the hell is wrong with Edward. What does he want exactly! Great chapter though Edward's making me a bit mad.

Ok so now I see what Edward thinks. And that's very confusing. He says he's not gonna get involved with his assistant after Emily. And now he's gone and gotten attached to Bella. He refuses to see his interactions with her for what they are, that is he's falling for her. And now he's taking her to a party. As a friend. It's so confusing. What's he thinking. Great chapter. Thank you so much for it.

Really can't wait for the big reveal! Great chapter.