Wow is all I can say! Could you imagine twilight starting like this!? Immersed into the vampire world from the beginning! Their love story front and center! A grown up version! We all aged ten years... Sometimes I wonder...leaving twilight as is in the first book was tender... in my view a love story that I will continue to enjoy reading all the stories by all the authors' amazing talent in this fandom! Again thank you for keeping Edward and Bella's love story alive! Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent with us, your readers. It's been ten years that twilight fandom was born and it's still going strong! So many amazing stories are yet to be discovered and written!

GREAT STORY! I tend to keep away from one shots because I'm always disappointed when they end so soon, but my resolve is weak :(

I love Bring Me To Life by Evanescence, but I must admit I couldn't help but hear Goofy's rendition of the song, curse my memes.

Anyway, still wanted to thank you for the amazing story even though I wish it were 30 chapters longer, I'm just a book nerd

~AB

Thanks for writing this wonderfull story!

I just read this one shot, and I did enjoy it. I rarely read one shots, because I always want more, and I must say that is definitely the case with this one. I doubt you intend to expand it, but I have put it on story alert just in case. It's really good, and would make a great multi-chapter story, so I hope you will consider expanding this story.

Thanks for writing and posting it. :)

please write more please please please

I love it! Bring me to life is my favorite song from Evanescence! :)

Keep up the good work!

That was really beautiful!

You had real good luck with the plot bunny, this turned out super! When you stop and think about it, this is the way to be turned, in a wash of passion and love and tender caring. Edward made this the best possible way to experience what is basically a pretty painful ordeal. For what it's worth, I think you done good, girl!

Brilliant sweet and romantic. Caz x

I love it.

very romantic and emotional story...great work!

This was really good. I loved it! Great story!

this is a great story. sucks that it is a one shot but that makes it even better! great work!

just loved this tasty little one shot

any chance of expanding it ... for instance a certain werewolf could suddenly appear in the meadow lol

great writing as with your others

Thanks! Just the way S.M. should have written it