I love your imagery and the plot is so good! Please continue this soon, I can’t wait to find out what happens to Sadie and Davis.

Whoa. Yeah, I'd be scared too if I got threats like that. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Ah, so it's Bishop now. I had a feeling it would be him and he would want to take over. Now things have gone from bad to worse. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Not good. Now Raph's gone and the others have been taken prisoner by the police. I bet Lenny is feeling guilty and he should be. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Oh, man, this isn't good that Leo killed himself though I can see why he did it. Now it sounds like everyone else will be in danger too. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Awesome start to this. I have never read said comics, but I want to one day because they sound awesome. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

You are a amazing writer. Please continue.

I was really enjoting this story, I wish you had finished it :( You have great writting skill and you created a very interesting plot :)

My holy! Never read something more intensive or frightening...I'm impressed - and slighly disturbed...
Can I hope for an update in the future?

Wow really good, can't wait for more :)

This story is brilliant. It's depressing, dark and almost made me cry three times but overall incredible. I love the description and the only thing I think you could improve is add a little more story on the daughter and her "Friends". Overall I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh, you sick twisted puppy!

I love you. This is perfectly thick with angst, horror and I have a hard time thinking that Leo did all that on his own. I really hope Raph was to blame or some of the worst scariness... ohh delicious shivers.

Now I can go back to writing my tragedy angst TMNT fic... and not feel as guilty... okay, no I'll enjoy torturing the guys. They earned it after all!

Even though I despise all things horror, this fic was just too good for me to let go. I really wish I had though. It's three in the morning and now I'll never get to sleep. Every time you finally lulled me into a (VERY FALSE) sense of security, you managed to rip it away just as violently. What skill to make such seamless transitions. Thanks for this. I look forward to the remaining chapters... I think.

Here's hoping for pleasant dreams!

Elsie

where are Splinter, April, and Casey during all this? i would have thought at least April would have said something to defend her friends. and is Don still alive, or did they kill him too?

Wow...! Again! You have one heck of a macabre mind! Never let it be said that the turtles can't hold one nasty grudge! At least that guy realizes that he DID do something horribly wrong. Why would anyone shoot the turtles anyway? Hug them and take them home and feed them and write stories about them, yes, but shoot them? Silly man.

Polaris