I really love the story but it would be awesome if you added more chapters and then an epilogue. Other than that I loved the story it was great

This is really great! :)

LMAO I laughed out loud when Tawni went, "I'm still the pretty one!"

I loved this, I really did. You're a good writer, keep it up! :D

Good job (:

That was Awesome! I loved it!

I am sorry it took me so long to finally get the chance to read this. I am a slow reader sometimes.

Anyway, this story was good for your first one. It was sad and full of drama. It also had romance in it (Channy, the best kind of romance!)

I think you did a good job. :D

Luv it!

INTENSE!

At first I was wondering why Sonny was so sad and what had made her upset and then BAM it was a really INTENSE issue. But you handled it well, I'm glad Chad treated her with such care. And then I wanted to punch her Dad IN THE FACE. IN. THE. FACE. And I was also glad to see Ellen! I love Ellen! I liked that you had light banter but the undertones of what was going on with Sonny and Chad was still there. Good as well. And great ending. Yay!

Wow. That was...great. I loved Chad in this 3

hate Sonny's dad though. Glad he was stupid enough to get caught.

lolve it

;)