Reviews for The Slap |
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BarTheVampirePrincess chapter 1 . 1/6 Just for you know : I kind of hate you |
Arami Estigarribia chapter 2 . 9/8/2019 Paul lorimar? Wtf men |
Taylor eaglebear chapter 1 . 4/24/2019 I think you should have done a little more explanation on the imprint thing |
AdoreThem chapter 20 . 11/6/2018 Great story, though I have one question. What happened to Sam and Emily's first baby? This last chapter only speaks of them having 6-month-old twins, but when Paul and Bella gathered everyone to tell them about what was wrong with her the first time in chapter 7, Embry said congratulation to Sam and Emily, cause they could hear the second heartbeat coming from her. |
rachel625 chapter 20 . 6/16/2018 Great story! |
joi chapter 6 . 3/10/2018 make more please |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14/2018 haha |
mounds01 chapter 20 . 11/15/2017 This is a very good story. Great job! |
Aggie94 chapter 20 . 10/22/2017 Great twist. Enjoyed all of it. Thanks for sharing your words |
M1A chapter 2 . 3/5/2017 Paul Lorimar? not Lahote?Oo |
mfedwards7 chapter 20 . 11/11/2016 That ending is so cute and cheesy. |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/28/2016 P |
Tilty.bbb chapter 20 . 6/3/2016 This was a great read. Nice job |
Emjezz chapter 9 . 3/13/2016 I loved you story so far but the threesome ... I generally don't habe anything against them but I dislike them in imprint stories. It's obviously your decision as the author and as I said your writing is good! I know you tried to be considerate of the possibility of readerd not liking the treesome by publishing the lemon seperately but, at least for me, that still didn't change the fact that I KNEW they had it . It makes me really sad because I loved your story so far but I won't continue reading this, I'm sorry. I will check out your other stories though (should you have any). |
rrochelle465 chapter 20 . 1/23/2016 Yay things are great bella and paul Is maried and the family is complete... This was a great story I am sad to see it end good Job... |