Awesome! This was so Tieria! It fit perfectly. I loved it. Great fic.

This was really well-written, minus a couple typos here and there. The tone is very calculating and precise, and I really thought that the diction was appropriate, both of which are fitting of Tieria. Nice fic.

Very well written. A little too vague for my liking, but the emotion was there. I liked how you addressed Tieria's pain of unacknowledged gratitude.

I particularly liked this line: "He was expecting Lockon – no, Neil Dylandy – to spout some strikingly mature comment in return and just laugh at Tieria's mood swings as usual, but the silence that followed said more than the prevaricating of Lockon Stratos ever could."

Very well-said.

Love Tieria's thought processes...:)

I've always thought Tieria was an interesting character, and I think you have captured him very well here. The comment about was Lockon fundamentally unstable or just an idiot had me laughing, but at the same time it sounded a very Tieria thing to think, as did his views of Allelujah as human. I also love the determination in the last line, all in all, very well written, you have a really nice style.