Excellent, exciting tale of intrigue and adventure - held my interest throughout!

u need to update or reads will stop reading your stores

A long wait, but a good story. Isn't it supposed to be "A Narrow Escape?" Your spelling needs work, as well as your grammar and punctuation. I am still working on chapt.18 and should have it done this weekend. I have been beta reading this crazy bad B5 story,chock full of bad spelling, grammar, and run-on sentences. You are a genius in comparison. :-)

I don't think poor Coiley can catch a break with these doctors, but luckily for him, he was only faking it. Otherwise, who knows what would have happened?

Hey Wende, this chapter was really worth the wait and I loved how you put in villain bits and heroic bits and tied the plot all together in this chapter.

I love hearing the motivations for the thieves and I am looking forward to seeing the impossibles back in action and I can't wait to find out what happens next!

good job my friend,

Irual

Somehow, I kind of figured Sandy was pregnant. Hope Multi's okay.

A great chapter, well worth the wait. However, being that I am a stickler for details, I noticed a few spelling errors that I feel you should know about: The others were staring (not starring) from Koora to Haroon; some things haven't gone as planned (not planed) and Before either (not ether) girl could answer. I hope I don't come across as being too unkind. It is a good story and I have been really enjoying it, even though I am not very familiar with the characters based on the cartoon. I will begin chapter 20 of "Unlucky Seven" shortly. I have some ideas that have been floating around in my head about my version of Scarlet O'Neal, Isis, the Thasians and Charlie. Also, Roberta will be successful this time at convincing Fisher that the ship has not been taken over by Klingons. The new chapter should be up and running in a few days. Good job! Until next time. ;-)

Wow...a very long-awaited chapter, and certainly worth our wait!

First of all, I really liked the recap at the beginning to cue us in to the story again. Secondly, your inclusion of me in a cameo role as the agent to finds the leather pouch was very lovely! I liked it a lot and thought it very nice of you to think of me in such a nice role! Thank you!

So much happened in this chapter that I can hardly recap all of it. The highlights that I especialy enjoyed were the suspence of the Impossibles being in the tent held captive and then when Multi starts to wake up. Later Big D not recognizing which boy was his agent was humourous.

At the hospital, I felt sorry for poor Coiley having to stay again and the image of him trying to pull his red trousers away from the nurse was very funny! And poor Multi with his head injury...awwww...

Near the ending of the chapter...the Thieves, hiding in their cavern and realizing intruders are on their way, is a great suspenseful ending to the chapter! What will happen next! Very enjoyable chapter...eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Finally! The review window is working! Yay! A great chapter, well worth the wait. There are a couple of spelling errors you may want to fix: "lovers attempt" should be "lover's attempt" and "captures" should be "captors".

I was praying that you would update this! I'm so glad! I was PRAYING! XD Well it was worth the wait! It's great to hear from you again, I've really missed talking to you and reading your wonderful stories! :D

EDITH

Poor Coiley. That's all that's coming to mind regarding that part of the chapter. Not to mention running out of the examining room, right in front of his crush . . . . . . hooo boy . . . . . talk about embarrassing. I'm actually a little surprised Big D wasn't more authoritative with him, considering he snuck out the first time. I'm also surprised the chief mixed up Fluey and Ali as well.

Anyway, just when you think all is about to end well, it doesn't. Not yet anyway. I wonder who's lurking in the Thieves Guild's secret tunnel? I have an idea of who it is, but I don't want to spoil it. I'll just have to wait and see what happens next time.

This is one of the stories I've been coming back to. Hope you update soon.

Check out my new story when you get the chance. I'm finally doing my own series.

Hi this is a really interesting chapter and I think that you are bringing all the characters together well to begin the endgame of your plot. I particularly like the hints you placed about the princess and how you wrote Skittles. Good job my friend and I hope to read more from you soon! your friend and pen pal Irual

Very exciting, it was worth the wait! I was getting nervous...

Skittles is so amazing, so much braver as a puppy then even I could be as a human girl XD She's such an insperation! :)

This has been the craziest chapter yet, I have no idea what's gonna happen next...I love it!

Again, it was worth it! :)

This chapter was definitely worth the wait, as it was well written and exciting. I love the characterization, and I also enjoyed the "Big Albert" reference. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.