This
Is
Absolutely
Without a doubt
The most beautiful,
Emotional, moving, Oneshot,
I have ever read.
I love it
I love it more than words can express

Wow... This is the best one shot I've ever read !:)

I think you did great. And I think this is fine as a one-shot. One thing I would recomend, is making the title in lowercase. It looks more professional that way. Other than that, well done, Silverdove was a beautifly crafted character and her feelings of anguish and regret and displayed clearly. It is heart-wrenching and I love it. Keep up the great work, I look forward to seeing more from you soon!

It was really good. Silverdove's feelings and thoughts are portrayed well and are understandable. It's nice.

WOW. I love this! It's just...really, really good.

W-O-W. I think I'm going to cry. That was really nicely done, you made the emotions really clear, and it was realistic. Well done.

That's really great.I like Silverdove so much,and I really,really hate Doveshine.I mean,she's meaner even than least Tigerheart made it as if a band of rogues attacked Bluestar,but Doveshine killed Harrierflight right in front of the whole was so sweetly wicked. I love wickedness.I love your story about wickedness.I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR Luck on your other ,I became a little insane after reading about your wickedness.I love being wicked!

Holy crow, that was very good. A perfect one-shot, and it makes me wonder if kin IS really everything...

The only problem is the phrase "emerald eyes". Cats do not know what emeralds are. If they see an emerald, they would just think it is a pretty green stone.

Again, love this story. It deals with an overly possesive mother with dark intentions, and how a daughter deals with it. Care to review mine?

ok well it was amazing, i absoloutly loved it!...would it be ok if i used the names of silverdove, dove shine and mabey dovefeather? if its ok with you i would use them. but withoiout the insanity and i will leave a little not in the begining saying which caracters are yours. please let me use them, but its ok if u dont, if you say not to then i wont use them, please reply.

thanks,

kelly

Aww, I feel so sorry for Silverdove; but... Great story! ; :D D8 3:

Wow, this is amazing. I really enjoyed it. One of few fanfics I've read that doesn't use real characters that I really enjoyed. Good job!

Awesome