I love your story!

My only problem is with the change of scenes because it takes awhile to realise that it's a diferent one.

I've actually been enjoying this fic. Could use a bit of paragraphing in some of the chapters because there were big walls of text, but it's very creative and very funny.

I noticed that we haven't seen any Itachi yet... is he going to show up? Will that mean I get to as well?

~Alicia~

haha :)

i cant beleive im saying this but i sorta feel sorry for sasuke i mean i HATE sasuke but i guess that even THAT isnt fair (i know life isnt fair but this is wrong)

oh well i hope you update soon XD

This story is the best evre...i mean ever! I don't just tell taht (dam i did it again) that to everyone. Your story is epic!

If anyone hates on this story pm them the letters: F and U and C and K...followed by Y and O and bringing up the rear U!

The text is too hard to read. Please double space the speeches and thoughts from the narration.

Awww no SasoDei? Lolz X3 Sasuke Bashing makes up for it though so I shall forgive you this time XD Lolz

Keep it up O

Aw, but breaking the 4th wall is so fun X3

Okay, you beat me X3 A deal is a deal X3 Just remember that it might be a few days since I also gotta write Seeing Ghosts and Baby Blue X3 But I will try my best X3

Lolz, I remember learning about the heart in Science XD We got to cut up a cow heart XD It was fun X3

Naruto could have chosen art since he thought it might have been an easy subject to pass X3

SasoDei X3

Im cheering for Gai, for once since I hate Sas'Hey-Im-A-Gay-Idiot-With-A-Duck-Butt-Hair-Cut-And-Im-Emo' X3 I hate him so damn much that I dont even know who I hate worse, him or SUCKura WHOREuno X3

Anyway, keep up the writing X3 You better update soon XD I wanna see if Woolfy can make Sasori and Dei get together X3 And I wanna see who wins the contest since I believe now it will be a pretty even match, and I wanna see how Naruto geys Hinata X3 Go Hinata! and ShikaTema is indeed good X3

:O

Hey, I just came back from holidays, like 2 days ago,

And I was killing myself to read something and then I came to your story...

I swear it made my night, Yea it's 11pm here :/

I love it, it's not one of those "oh you know whats going to happen next."

And the best part is, you put everyone in the story so well, so give your self a clap, not all stories can make my day...

But do add a little more of Hinata after all she was part of the story.

hey just have to say that i love your story and i get where you getting the extra names like sora and kairi from kingdom hearts. and daisuke might be from d. . Am i right? i hope so anyway good work and keep on writing. :)

YaY! *glomps*

Update, update, update~

O

Poor Neji XD He nearly gotted murdered by ninenine X3 Lolz

Lolz, Gai will never get more kisses that Kakashi XD Kakashi is smexy! Gai is...*pokes gai with a stick* Ah, Gai. X3 Least the girls get to see Kakashi's face X3

TRUE ART IS CHANGE! Lolz XD *glomps once more* Lolz, they do look alike, dont they? X3 Lolz, but then again in Sekkus Skato they're brother and sister X3

Lolz, DeiDei think's his Danna looks Smexy~ X3 But who doesnt?

Lolz X3 SasoDei, SasoDei, SasoDei~

Now Woolfy just gotta ask Sasori what he thinks about DeiDei X3 *sings to tune of Spider Pig* SasoDei, SasoDei, Saso Saso, SasoDei, scream out, it is tha SasoDei~!

Lolz O Keep up the good work and update soon! -

Keep going.

lol bra to prom. damn -_-

Lolz XD GO WOOLFY! O, I reakon Woolfy should write a SasoDei yaoi scene for Icha Icha XD She names the characters Sori and Rei (Something Ive done before for english XD ) but they look exactly the same as Sasori and Dei, then Sasori and Deidara both realise that it is them in the story XD Lolz

Good work RayRay O Keep it up