She has turned into a real bitch. And she doesn't care who she hurts in the process. I don't care for her attitude in this story. She needs an ass whipping badly. And she isn't setting a very good example for Aoi either.

I have never laughed so hard in my life chapter 45 was the best. Lol. Than you so much for a wonderful story

I dont really like Kyoko in this story. She's a real bitch to Kuon. Aoi has no respect for him either. Both of them are really chauvinistic towards the guys. If Kuon stood up and argued with her she would just threaten to go back to Paris and that is blackmail. But we'll see what happens.

The plot of the story is very interesting and amazing but the way it is written is not that good 'cause sometimes it becomes confusing that who is saying what line. And there has been a lot of use of a certain phrase i.e.' rolled my eyes' which is good but at certain situation it just doesn't feel right. And the characters didn't acted like I expected b'cuz meeting after such a long time they can't be that casual & its suprising that how Aoi acted when she got to meet her parents because it was way too overall the story was good.
PS: this is just a healthy criticism & btw I loved the story:)

Kyoko is a bit of a hypocrite, she gets mad if someone swears, but she swears, she hates it when someone lies, but she lies, she hates violence, but she is violent. I don't see why Kuon puts up with it. And Aoi is really a rude little shit. Especially since she just met her dad for the first time and her brother. Kyoko thinks it funny. That is so disrespectful to Kuon when he's done nothing wrong. I guess i'm just a little old fashion, when it comes to respecting people.

odd, she gets mad at him for her deception at not telling him what she is hiding from him. how messed up is that.

You did a great job writing this one. Thoroughly enjoyed it. The omake was great too. funny. Thank you for this one.

I would have left them there after the way they treated him earlier. Let them suffer a little bit ...lol

With the way she keeps threatening to leave , he should just fine leave. Try finding Aoi on your own. Call her bluff. Or she that big of a bitch to leave again.

Boy she is cold, uncaring, and self righteous hasn't she? Almost makes ya feel like is faking her feelings for Ren and I see a bit of her mom in the way she treats Yuki sometimes. I know she loves him, but she really needs to loosen up a bit. She not really letting him be a boy sometimes which makes her look too controlling.

I don't really care for the way everyone treat Kuon. They are so disrespectful towards him. He doesn't deserve that. I never much cared for the stupidity of Kyoko in the original series, but i really don't like her in this story more. There has to be some in between place for her, where she is strong and self assured but not as vile and self absorbed. What else is strange is how close her Aoi are when the just met. Kyoko has kind of pushed Kuon and Yuki aside and treat them like they are beneath her. And whats sad is everyone lets her get away with it.

Why would you make her so vicious? Especially toward Kuon. It's really not a lady like thing to do. Makes ya wanna punch her lights out. Her mother is really showing up in her.

her threatening Kuon was just wrong. At times she is worse then her mother when it comes to treating her so called love ones so cruelly .

20b

God whats with Kyoko she went from a crybaby to an Amazon and a violent one at needs to find a place in between the two. I'm surprised Kuon takes her crap with out getting mad.