Reviews for Child's Eye Terror |
---|
Purple Majestic chapter 7 . 2/6/2013 this was so sweeet and deep...I loved it! |
LoveLikeElena chapter 7 . 11/17/2011 Aloha! I LOVED this story! I can't wait for the sequel! This chapter was really sweet and very well written! I would so read more of your NCIS stuff! I could see Sara joining the team! |
LoveLikeElena chapter 6 . 11/15/2011 Aloha! This chapter was really good. i don't think it was a good idea for them to call Sara 'princess so soon though. They should try to find their own special name for her since Ziva called her that all the time. I'm just saying. I really do like the chapter though! I can't wait for more! God bless, Lauren |
LoveLikeElena chapter 5 . 11/15/2011 Aloha! i Hope you're doing well. Oh my! i can't believe you did that! You almost had me crying. I'm gonna continue reading though, don't worry. I think that was unfair of Kate to bargain a hug from Sara with the only photo of Ziva she had. In fact, it was downright mean! Sara was afraid and not sure where she was. Kate had no right to do that! Abby would have been better suited to help Sara come out of her shell, even Tony or Duckie. I'm not mad at you, I promise. I'm just saying. I can't wait to read more! God bless, Lauren |
LoveLikeElena chapter 4 . 11/15/2011 Aloha! I hope you're doing well. I just got your replies to my review. I really do like this story. I don't know why anyboyd wouldn't like it. I can't wait for more! I LOVE Sara and Ziva's parental relationship! I can't wait for more! What happened to the bananas and coconuts Sara had? God bless, Lauren |
LoveLikeElena chapter 3 . 11/15/2011 Aloha! I LOVE this story! This chapter was really awesome! Sara is so brave for her age! Her mother taught her well. I hope she let her be a kid as well though. I can't wait to read more! I hope Sara returns with food for them soon! And I Hope Gibbs gets to them soon! I'm used to Ziva and Tony going out, but I can get used to her going out with Gibbs for this story. I can't wait for more! God bless, Lauren |
LoveLikeElena chapter 2 . 11/15/2011 Aloha! Oh my gosh! i just started reading this story and it is really good! Please don't kill Ziva! she's my fave char, but more than that, her daughter needs her! I'm gonna read on and hopefully Ziva will be okay. I LOVE this story so far! You have everyone down perfectly! And I love seeing Ziva interacting with kids! Her as a mother is awesome! God bless, Lauren |
rosebud26 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011 FYI...I think you should change the summary because Ziva would have only been 9 yrs old in 1991...just sayin' |
Hope you enjoyed reading this chapter 7 . 2/12/2011 An understatement, Just when I think I have seen your bet work "You Top Yourself" |
xiatien chapter 6 . 10/25/2010 sniff its so sad you killed ziva ( btw i dont like kate ( |
Its good chapter 6 . 10/24/2010 Your writing is improving by leaps and bounds |
blackandblueangel chapter 6 . 10/24/2010 Glad you continued with this story. |
mollygibbs101 chapter 5 . 6/9/2010 Oh no, Ziva died! At least Kate is there for Sarah. Very beautiful, Achoti Habishka, Mol x |
Nymphadora Andromeda Lupin chapter 5 . 6/8/2010 *sniffles* But but but... *hugs tightly* she has no mother now '( will Katie adopt her? |
T chapter 5 . 6/8/2010 Completely gut wrenching "I love it" |