Very good :)

WOW! WTH?

Love the idea of a multi chap,

do it, please :D

This "Four years and ten months since their forth daughter was born.

Three years and ten months since she was diagnosed with Leukaemia.

Two years and six months since she died.

Ten months since their forth daughter would have turned four."

Made me want to cry. I'm looking forward to reading about this precious girl.

good writing, but far too many kids and way out of character. D:

Do it! That would be so cool! If you need an editer every once and a while I'd be happy to help! I love Ziva/Tony and this seems like it could be a really great story!

sounds awesome to me!

i completely think you should write a chapter for each! I Loved this!

it's good

Loved it! I hope you continue!

Nice start to the story.

The only thing that irks me (and this is nothing personal, I notice this kind of thing in every fic I read) is that there are a few little grammar and spelling mistakes... But if you wanted a beta reader, I would be happy to help... :) Great idea though.

O my god! I loved it! Of course Ziva and Tony should get togheter! You are very smart!

You should definitlay do a chapter for each fic. It would be so good!

Hey,

I really, really liked that story and I think it would be great, if you wrote a chapter to each sentence.

yes, i defiantly want the multi chap fic, lol. update soon, because i can't wait to read it.