nice ending

Wow, the plot twist changes drastically. Everyone from normal student become a mercenary/soldier. Hahaha, nice one.

I really like the tension between Rinoa and Squall

HELL YEEEEAAAHH! Sing Hallelujah to the sky above!
Oh my, that was the sweetest thing I've ever read. Imagining Squall saying those words are just... Ah, I'm melting with all the sweetness in this chapter.
Thank you for writing it soooo beautifully.
I wonder how Cloud will react when he found out that Rinoa and Squall are together. #continuesmelting

ROAR!

Uh-oh! About time the Puberty Boy is turning into Lover Boy. XD
Looks like Cloud is starting to like Rinoa as well. It's getting more interesting. Nyehehee.. Love it!

Hello Scribbleness!

I read this story about a year ago...and immediately fell in love with it. I stayed up for hours reading it, wanting to know what happened next, until I reached the end, unfortunately. From that time on this has been one of my favorite fanfictions ever, and I won't stop reading it anytime soon! It was the one that made me fall in love with Squinoa. Everything about this was extremely clever and well-written; it gripped me right from the beginning. You story is so inspiring, and I look forward to seeing more from you.

- Yuna :)

..that was a great story! congratulations! ahaha! I love it!

Nice ending but do I sense Sequel? Probably not!

Thanks for writing such a great story oh oh and I must say that I am partial to a ZellXTifa pairing! Just saying!

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Woah I thought it would have been Griever but this definitely works big time. No limit breaks kind of saddens me but hey Aeons and GFs and Espers and Mako and Zack and SeeDs awesome

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Before I go any further, I just pray that this story is complete as the suspense is calling me. Don't tell me Rinoa gets Sorceress Powers this way?

Oh and Yuna with Aeons, nice touch. I had a feeling Squalls friends were SeeD too... Lol.

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Well done! My heart actually stopped for awhile when you introduced Lenne. I was thinking there would e this big misunderstanding and he would dance with her to try and "forget" Rinoa but thank god you put them together!

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Interesting that you used a dissidia inspired pairing and not Cloti. Although I personally root for Cloti as long as you have Squinoa and Tidus/Yuna (can't think of a couples name for them although I think people usually say Tuna or was it Yudus? Whatever!)

I can't really complain as long as your story stays awesome!

Leblanc is such a beech though... Oh and the Sudae haring scene is soooo OOC for Squall but hey, I LOVED IT. Though Rinoa having a stained shirt should have made her very uncomfortable and self-conscious. Just adding a logical deduction here! On to the next chapter I guess!

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One chapter in and already I am tingling with excitement. This just sounds so damn epic. I realized you have not really introduced the characters yet oh and I gotta ask you who are the two red heads? One is obviously RedXIII but isn't he like non-human? The second one is from Squall's gang right? Who else is red headed?

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kwehroar! XD