I LOVE IT!

nooooooooooo

omg my heart skipped a beat when i sor the wored end but theres still more its ok

I got to admit that it was difficult to decide whether I loved or hated this story. It was my hatred of Twilight vs my love of Xander. But since there were no characters from Twilight and Xander is awesome, I'm gonna go with enjoyed.

good story

Another good story! A very original idea for a YAHF! I'm on my way to the sequel now!

cool

I like it.

it's an interesting story, and a good read, if just a little short. theres only one thing that bugged me about this and I hope you will fix it. Have you looked at the title since you posted? I mean really looked? because you forgot an L. I apologize for sounding off it's 6 am of the new year and I think I'm still drunk.

For some reason, this story reminds me of vampires from Hellsing. Especially with the whole stabbing a vampire with your hands.

I look forward to the sequel.

... Cool!

I only wish it could have been longer! There was a lot more you could have done with it, but I suppose It'll all be in the (hopeful) sequel?

Hope it comes soon!

Cliona

More.. more please hurry up!

That was awesome. It seems like Xander has a type of lie detector or semi mind reading ability that allows him to know lies and find the truth without reading everything or something. I don't know. LOL Too bad the novels don't exist cause it would have been a funny sight to have Giles reading the Twilight series as research. LOL That would have been interesting and a source of extensive blackmail. - I can't wait for the sequel.

great story, while im not a fan of twilight in general, mainly because of the vampire thing(they arent vampires) but also on the badly written mary sue romance, but still i do like this story and i cant wait to see the sequal to it, but anyway till your new story ja ne

it makes sense and thios is really cool