Cool story, and you were very detailed in describing the scenes and character's personalities

You are an idiot you just killed the best part of the game and plot the unieqeness of the siren's .

this was such a fun read! these two are definitely my fav characters. I liked your lilith, but I loved your patricia! you kept her her smart, funny, crazy self. Also, I dug the plot. It was good scifi and even more importantly it was plausible for what we had to go by. also, I liked the complexities of ur characters. there was some good introspection thrown in to balance out their dominant traits. The action scenes were fun too, they fit the gameplay and even complimented the characters. AWESOME WRITE and I can't wait for a sequel! Did I mention Tannis is my fav character?

I will admit that is a great fic. Shame it is not longer :)

Very nice. Fun read.

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Thanks for the aweosme story! Certainly a good read. :)

A great story. one of the few borderlands fics I've ever bothered to read.

It does feel kinda incomplete though so I'll be keeping an eye out for those future stories you mentioned.

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Plotline - Compelling, interesting.

All in all, I'm impressed with the quality of this fic. Perhaps you might be interested in exploring the backstory of the four characters in the game next? ;)

Another chapter of pure awesomeness! Good to see Lilith again. It'd be nice to see more of Marcus and Pierce in later chapters. Good work, and update soon!

Awesome chapter! Hope to see more. I'd love to see ones focused on Lilith again. Anyway, good work.

Tannis should join the drama club.

Then kill eveyone in it!

looking forward to more.

This is a good story Phoenix. I enjoy your writing style and the in depth look into the characters and places in the story really give it a realistic feel and immerses you in the story and the characters. I'm sure you did some Wiki searching for this:) Thank you for the good read and will look forward to reading the rest of Lilith's journey in the future.

I love this Chapter when she made that burn i laughed out loud!

Awesome work! Please continue!

Hey, nice chapter. Kind of short, but from Tannis's PoV, which is cool. Glad to hear from this fic again, one of the few good borderlands fics out there. Update soon! :)