That was cute but the fact that he killed Riku before he imploded kinda sucked
Keep on the writes

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

nice story

Interesting story. XD

aww~ thanks for sharing

Sugoi! Fantastic story hun! Makes me want to read more crosses of this genre (I checked 'em out, but there's not many)! _I thought it was awesome! I hope you get more stories updated/put out soon! I look forward to reading them! _~ ::waves:: Blessed Be in all ye do hun! Ja matte!

nice the ending was a bit rushed but otherwise I loved it- there were a few times where Cloud called Mizu Harry but Harry hadn't ever told him that did he? Riku had to find out himself and Sora(and nobodies) knew him as Shay all others knew him as Mizu isn't that right? or am I wrong? but I still really loved it thank you for this!

Ah if that wasn't the cuteness thing ever. Way to go.

It would be totally awesome if you expounded on this and made a full length story (*hint hint nudge nudge*)

Although.. you have a bunch of stories already in the works o.0 How you keep track of what you are writing...

Oh My God you just have to write a sequel. I really would love to see what happens with Harry and Cloud now. Great job by the way. lol

awsome but it ends rather sudenly

love it