Man,still confused on the whole 4 male/female funniest part was when 7,8,1,5 9 like 'What the hell. Cracked me up hahaha.2 didnt come as a me heard alot of 2 pedafile people wrote.5 isnt a resembles the common man and has a meek said:"The Common Man's a fool" 5 cute at being that.

this was adoribel you wrote everyone very well and the ending was so sweet I really like how you wrote 1 you didnt make him a heartless oger but you were abule to give him a soft side while keeping him in character.I really love the part where they were yelling at each other from their rooms it was so funny!.Good job!

Lol, 5 is a pussy, and I very well thought he would snore.

This story was so cute, I could barely contain myself. But the one thing that put me off was the lack of pronouns for the twins. Yes, I understand that the Twins have no verified gender, so get creative. Really, I don't know why people give a crap about their genders, though. I've really had enough of the arguing. If people want them to be, they can be girls, or boys, or one of each! ONLY SHANE ACKER WILL EVER KNOW WHAT THE HECK THEIR GENDER IS!

But still, this was excellent and intertaining. BTW, 2 did not come off as a pedophile at all.

The arguement part made my morning/day/afternoon/evening/night.

XD

“Go to sleep!”

“Yeah!”

“Both of you shut up!”

“No, you!”

“I’m sorry!”

“It’s okay!”

“No it’s not!”

“Shut up, 8!”

“Silence! Don’t make me come down there!”

“Yeah!”

“You be quiet too!”

“But-”

“Now go to sleep!”

I LAUGHED SO HARD AT THIS PART! this was a good story! i haven't seen the movie yet, but i'd say you got 1 down pretty well!

Author's notes at the end were my favorite part, besides the family moment with 4 and 1. That made me go 'aw'.

Aw-haww. I love this story. XD Makes me not dislike 1 so much. Not to mention, it's so well written. Excellent job.

I love this. You included every character just as they should have been (I thought 2 wasn't a pedophile at all, he practically reeked of Grandfather...which is kind of weird when you think of it, since 1 is technically older than him...)

I got the lava lamp thing. It was a good idea.

7's bed was a bird's nest, right? If so, I really want to congratulate you on that - it suits her perfectly. 1's bedroom suited him as well. Yes, he IS majestic, isn't he? And kind of ornate, like a pipe organ...that's why we love him so...xD

Well, kudos for keeping my favorite grumpy stitchpunk as grouchy and fearful as ever, and keeping 4 his usual inquisitive self. And other than the various grammar/spelling mistakes, it was an easy read. I really liked this!

-Kimsa

funny and cute at the same time :)