Uwaahhh...

I'm still confused. Is Cloudypaw really Cloud, or are they related in some way?

Awesomely done!

I know I haven't been here a while, as you can see, I haven't even updated my own stories for more than a few months. So sorry... hope you haven't eaten yourself yet :(

I love the sudden twist to the plot line with Cloud, but I don't really like the unrealisticness (if that's a word) with Cloud being shapeless and stuff. I would much rather he be Cloudy and stay that way, you know what I mean? :D But don't let me stop you. After all, this version is pretty good too.

Anyways, Cloudy is sort of a main character, and it doesn't help that he dies so soon.

And besides, Cloudy is supposed to be from WindClan, so how will WindClan cats know him if he changed into Cloudy from Cloud? (Do you understand what I'm trying to get at?)

I think that's too much criticism, but I think that I'll save the compliments for the later chapters. ;D

Yours,

Snowflight

This is a good story i can't wait for the sequel!

This story is awesome! Oh, and i expect that smile!

I'm liking this story so far!

o: yes. yes I am. -shudder- I like stories that have happy endings. ;D

Wow...i'm glad you posted the other one.

Wow! That's really...I'm at a loss of words. If I didn't know better i would say Winter was psychotic [shudders].

OH MY GOSH! From the happy, fluffy ending to the sad and crazed and gory one. A very odd transition. It was written excellently, although I suggest trying to find phrases other than "slicing to ribbons." It sounds really cool, I just feel like I've heard it before.

I think I'm sticking with the happy ending.

Even though there hasn't been to much death in a little while, the lack of it still seems like such a foreign concept. And I was fully prepared for someone to die at the ending. But I'm really glad that The Alliance was finished off with a lighthearted and open ending. It's not the usual happily ever after where everything ends up in an ethereal fantasy world. You really told it like it is, and that's a good quality in a story. I'm really hoping for the sequel, because Sunny and Flicker's life has only just begun.

You did an amazing job with this story, and I'm so glad you reached the hundred review mark.

i think i might be crying. That was so beautiful, we finally came full circle :). If you are making a sequel than I'm going to read it!

beautiful ending, can't wait for the sequel!

*sniffs* That was beautiful and I'm sad to see it go! But you should totally do a sequel for Flicker and Sunny! Oh ya, I was HollyleafHater2410,but I changed my username and finally got an account! As you can see, I really adore this story and you're an amazing writer! i can't wait for your other stories! XD

~Lacey

No story has ever gotten a message from STARCLAN BEFORE BUT YOUR STORY IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ EXELLANT JOB!

i love your story it is really the best ever