THANK YOU for this amazing last chapter , it 's so perfect , the ending !

But again I really like this style of writing (is it first person narration?), I mean yeah you get it all the time but there wasn't any dialogues which made it very different (in a good way), and pretty interesting to read.
I do have to say that some or most of the characters I got really confused on, their intentions. I think it was more due to the tones (like I said previously); where when it was more light and humorous like this chapter, the kids seemed liked canon SP and more kiddish– i.e. Damien being more "affectionate" or possessive of Pip. While in the other chapters the tone of Pip was more serious and sophisticated– i.e. Damien harassing and didn 't really care if others groped Pip.
Maybe it's just me though, I'm probably just gonna have to read this a second time for it to fully process in my head. Thins tend to get confusing for the first time reading so it could be just that xD

Anyways amazing job with this! Thank you for writing and sharing this :D

I 'm kinda confused with Damien here , he doesn 't like sharing his "toys " but he allowed the other kids to grope Pip when they were fucking ? Or is it more of a you can touch and look but you can 't fuck ? :o

Anyways I 'm glad you went for another two chapters instead of 5 :D

Oh man what happened at that last section ? It was kinda unclear , did they do an orgy with him in class ?

yess , my babies are untouched and tainted , thank you for doing that to Creek qvq

Okay there was rape and no he is not a virgin , oh boy . That was also a quick change in tone . The previous chapters made it seem like some mellow dark fic but this was more on the dark humor side , which I do like , maybe even better than the previous tone xD Either way I 'll like it , this is pretty entertaining . I kinda want more Dip interactions tho uvu

So .. Pip is still a virgin right ? Only been sexually harassed and what not ? I hope there 's no rape , I know Pip mentioned an almost rape , I just hope when he does do it , it 's consented (I 'm gonna doubt it tho , especially with this verse of SP qvq)

But this is really cool (it 's already completed I think but ), you should def keep with this format . It 's kinda new for me and it makes it interesting to read

He ... He 's ... He 's being targeted by Damien and Cartman (?) X,D Like they already claimed him , so the rest of the kids are backing off /protecting him from the North kids , lmfao . I don 't even know why this makes me laugh , maybe it 's because Pip is completely oblivious to this xD

An average kid in an average town (south park 's version of average that is ), is the vibe I 'm getting .
This has almost all my ships , from what got off of the hints . I feel like I 'll be enjoying this uvu

I missed this story :) I was to busy to review tho, but I can now :D This is Awesome! 1 more chapter! Please!

As always each update juet gets better and better so being pip kinda whore i would ask for more but then again im happy with this ending 2

Omg, I didn't know you'd updated! Thank you so much! I'm in arush, so this comment will be short- it's hilarious, entertaining, amusing, well detailed, and just...awesome in general! I didn't think you'd update this after the last chapter...but you did! It's a miracle, usually people never continue their South park Damien and pip stories they've quitted on. Not that you did, though.
Anyway, it's fantastic!

Love it

Lol, this was utterly hilarious. XD Especially the ending, with Pip's violent threats. I loved the drama and the craziness, especially the "mating season" part and all the horny students. It was very entertaining to say the least. XD I read this on a different website, and begged you to update it, but now I see it's completed and that makes me feel a bit better because now I can sleep at night knowing you weren't thinking about adding more drama. Well, it would've been great if it was continued though, but I mean, if you had left me on a cliffhanger it'd be way worse than ending it like this cuz I'd be pissed thinking about what all the future chapters would be like if you had lost interest in the story before even finishing it. So yeah, it's good. Loved it, I'll check out more of your works!

U did awesome, rlly creeped me out cuz of how disturbing it was, but all in all, pretty good.

Creeeeeeekk

oooo yes kyman!