Wow I loved this story so much! I stayed up
all night reading it and just finished at 5am. I’m so glad I stumbled upon this story! Your writing style is incredible and your story lines were exciting and unique. Thanks for writing!

Excellent story, and I will go read the sequel tomorrow. The only thing that really seemed out of place was the many, many, many hours of conversation between the jailbreak and the portent for Voldemort.

Terrific action, pacing, drama, suspense, humor, all in this chapter. Lots of writers flail around or quit at the end of a huge story, but you are keeping things exciting. Good work.

All the way through the story, from day 1, I have expected Rita to "bug" the conversations. Everyone says all sorts of things in pubs, restaurants, the ministry, Hogwarts, at funerals, etc.

Good writing. PeopleSometimes their youth shows, and it's heartbreaking. Harry was a dimwit to leave the memories available. Bella was a dimwit to take them out in public.

Every word out of Sidra's mouth has been so snide, snotty, and smug, I keep wanting to dress her in a Star Trek red shirt, so she will be killed off at the first opportunity in the story. You know she's a spoiled brat, when Draco looks like an angel in comparison. LOL

Wow. If only the D.E. trackers had self-destruct features to eliminate the villains efficiently.

The outskirts of a town can cover a large area, yet Harry met the Potters quite easily. Weird. And why they and the next group waited to discuss strategy till the last moment, I'll never know.

Draco makes me laugh. Thanks.

Delightful. I hope the trunk has air holes.

I like the bat signal, to call law enforcement. Now if Harry only had a phone connection directly to the government offices. Dobby would make a fun Alfred.

Yay! Great rescue.

Clever Narcissa.

Wow, did Bella fuck up, not waiting to meet and interrogate her Aunt. Bella is impulsive and vengeful in any timeline. Too late now.

Thank you for this wonderful story!