Reviews for Naughty Secrets
golden2779 chapter 15 . 11/12/2019
Its settled then, happily newlyweds! Now how about them parents...
golden2779 chapter 14 . 11/12/2019
Oh shit is right! Hahaha
golden2779 chapter 13 . 11/12/2019
A resolution. Like the dual performances!
golden2779 chapter 12 . 11/11/2019
Awe shot, it's about to go down! Loving it!
golden2779 chapter 11 . 11/11/2019
I cant believe he acted that way! So happy Bella punched that face! Lol
golden2779 chapter 10 . 11/11/2019
It's great, she is confident enough to not go chasing and not to be shut up in her room. Love it
golden2779 chapter 9 . 11/11/2019
Oh yes, been waiting for this union! Thanks, hotter than imagined.
golden2779 chapter 8 . 11/11/2019
I know now, that you might of been one of the writer's who stopped mid story because of feed back. I leave reviews, but am one who feel stupid leaving reviews after reviews that just say awesome. So I only review oh so often. But your a/n got to me. Even if its 'awesome', I will review. This is my first story of yours, and went in knowing unfinished, but your idea/story line intrigued me. So, thank you. I enjoy what I have read so far.
emelan chapter 23 . 2/14/2019
This was scorching hot and great read.
quisha1991 chapter 14 . 1/19/2019
Oh shit is correct
charbronte chapter 20 . 10/8/2017
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ChristyWIX chapter 23 . 8/30/2017
I have to say it was great that Charlie threw back in Bella's face all the things he didn't like that she had done and said nothing. Then got up and walked out. It was even better that Sue dragged Charlie's ass back to Bella and Edward's and invited her kids, to hash it out right there and then. All kids but Seth being in on the white ass joke, was funny. That part when Kate said she wished she had taken a ride on Edward when she had the chance, was absolutely hilarious. I seriously laughed so hard. Especially because it was EPOV and he was the one narrating that. It was also funny that their romp on their webcam, came through Jasper's TV. Whoops! I loved this epilogue. So hot and sexy. Funny and loving. And, Marissa at the end there. Very wonderful story that I very much loved. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us here. ~Christy
ChristyWIX chapter 22 . 8/30/2017
Twenty-five hours to get there? Should've gone to Australia for that much travel time. Wowza! I had no idea it takes that long to get from point a to point b. I am really glad they opted for the short plane ride back to Fairbanks. Saved a shit ton of time. I thought it was funny that Bella was squicked out by Charlie getting his sex life back. I am fifty, my husband forty-nine. We've been more active this last decade than ever before. I loved that they barely left their cabin the first couple of days, as honeymooners should. It was good that they did see some sites while there though. I don't think Edward will ever get to plan a vacation for them again though, lol. Loved that they did the mile high club. I kind of figured these two would. Your statement at the very end. About having hot sex, complete adoration for each other and happily ever after. It is possible. I am one of the very lucky women that has this. I know how fortunate I have it too so, I know not to take it for granted. It is an amazing life.
ChristyWIX chapter 21 . 8/30/2017
The letter she wrote to Paul was wonderful. That was impressive. I really liked that she knows how much her husband stresses over things, so she kept his list small and easy. Charlie offering Renee's and his wedding set to Edward and Bella, made my eyes leak. That was such a strong scene and so many feels in it, gah! Absolutely beautiful. You made me smile with the men getting their spa day and how much they enjoyed it. Jacob made me giggle with his loving his own hands. Their party later and the women dancing with them . . . including Jane for Jake! I hope they may have hit is off. We'll see.
OMG! The way Bella stood her ground with that pompous ass of a father Edward has, was brilliant! She was spectacular in that whole scene. She knew what was coming, thanks to Esme, was prepared for it and handled it so effing well. I sincerely loved that scene. Then that wedding was one of the very best that I have ever read here in the fandom. I love that it was simple, yet elegant. The flowers being handed out to all the women in attendance. Then the photo of Renee. Charlie talking to Renee. The reaction Bella had of the rings, so good. I loved that Bella has their vows framed and ready for them to recite. It was such a fantastic wedding. That reception was perfect. A leisurely afternoon in the park amongst friends and family. Loved it. Edward loved it. Even his asshat father seemed to be enjoying himself. Thank you for this chapter.
ChristyWIX chapter 20 . 8/30/2017
Thank goodness she is going to be just fine. It was funny when Charlie just left Bella's hospital room when Jake brought up Heidi's. He wasn't ready for that discussion yet. It was sweet that Charlie reprimanded Bella for not allowing him to walk her down the aisle. I hope they have another wedding, just so they remember it. Her telling Jake she didn't like his double standards when it came to the club, had to be said. Her pointing out that he had to gone into some debt because he was watching, whereas she paid a lot of bills she otherwise could not afford. I liked that he was shocked at the amount of money she did make and that he seems to have changed his tune about the dancing. I am glad, for both of them, that he never did see her. I think it may have traumatized Jake, lol. I am glad she doesn't have any permanent damage done to her. I am surprised that she isn't having some nightmares. Although, I am very glad she isn't. I love that her friends all helped them move her house to his. The landlord better have let her out of that lease. It wasn't their fault she was taken but, they have to understand why she would never want to go back there. To expect her to keep paying for the place, would be cruel. She certainly seems to still have her spark and I am glad for that. The note from Paul was sad. He truly is rather damaged. Doesn't seem he will ever be okay either. The goings on inside an insane person's mind is scary. He really felt she was an animal locked away and he was saving her. *shivers*
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