Funny!

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Funniest TOS story I have ever read! Very well-written.

Perfect! :) I love them too.

I don't know how many times I've read this story now - I absolutely love it. I can hear both of their voices as I read through and it flows so perfectly. Even with little more than dialogue I can easily picture their actions and reactions to each other and their situation.

"Get your gigolo ass down here and save us!" This and the spider just about killed me. (Although I totally sympathize; I hate spiders too.) I loved this piece; the dialogue was very well written and very true to the characters.

A library is a bad place to read this story. People are giving me funny looks...

LOL funny story but did McCoy/Bones ever had a panic attache on the show also please tell me Spock and McCoy get out okay?

ROFL the spider part!

I had to put a hand over my mouth to stop myself from laughing out loud (it's late at night).

This narrative was an effective source for the purpose of eliciting a jocular reaction. :) Data fan.

Quite entertaining. You did a fairly good job of capturing the interaction between Spock and McCoy, and you did quite well with the characterizations. Good work overall.

Absolutely amazing. They were both very in character (oddly enough McCoy being afraid of spiders seems completely logical). And those last few lines were killer. I was busting up laughing.

oh...I love it when they fight! nice job!

LOVE the banter! Great use of dialogue (made me lol), and you kept them in character all the while. Keep up the awesome work! :3 (Oh Kirk, you player xD)

Very good. Very funny.

“We're not in the broom closet, Jim!”

That had me laughing the hardest. Good job.

hahaha awesome!

I loved the dialogue, I could see it happening :D