So I'm going to review this (just because I'm going through the archives) and if you happen to care at all about this little fic you wrote so long ago, I just want to praise you for it. I wish you had completed it, partially for my own enjoyment and partially for your own enjoyment to look back on. Wherever you are now, I just want to thank you for having written this once upon a time.

:)

Did he really want to kill Zack?Cloud he? Despite their

Should be, "could he".

This AU is very different and captivating in its own way. You've managed to hatch out so many plots that have nothing to do with the game itself which is refreshing.

Oh my gawd. Why didn't you finish this. I hate chu. T . T

Anyway, it was really impressive, how you devised the sickness and played around with morals... Hmmn. Well, my guess is that Hojo was the one behind all of this. I mean, it is entirely clear cut that he is the only one that was going to benefit from all that happened. And shinra.

Well, whatever the case was, Zack's condition was being monitored, possibly - as an anomaly... that Hojo was knowledgeable of. It is also possible that whatever project that his father had been working on might have been taken by enemy hands - or it was being conducted by the science department - by another faction or Hojo himself. Having Cloud kill Zack would be a misleading tactic that would have the boy thinking that of course- why would he have Cloud assassinate Zack when Zack could probably go off dying.

Of course, in the event of Zack's death - Sephiroth would be blaming himself - and other people... Cloud particularly. Well, Mn. NICE CHAPTER

I really loved it but but but... you're not going to update this anymore are you? So I'm going to check if you have any other interesting stories... But I'm almost too sure that you're gone... DEAD and stopped writing altogether. NYA. Why is everyone leaving. ._. I hate real life. Or life calls... or writer's blocks.

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Mn. Zack is dying... that didn't hit me quite well ... the idea of Cloud killing him was a little bit better anyway waiting off for his condition to worsen would be another option. Hmn. Wonder... I wonder :D

Anyway it was a great chapter. Finally all the pieces are fitting in, just wondering what is it about the tattoo

oh. XD. I se what you mean. Well, there's something interesting about the way the way the sun touches your hair and makes it all yellowish white... lightens it up and it just begs to be touched. . Okai, anyway that was a lame description. Mn. I really need my coffee.

Wo I'm really interested with Cloud's past - and what would this have something to do with hojo :D?

Good story but man...u haven't updated in a very very long time! I hope that ur gonna continue it? Please let us know, waiting for an ending to a story is hard. Thanks for posting.

-giggles-

So you haven't played the game? Well, that makes this the perfect fanfiction for me, because I haven't played it either. XD

Zack/Seph is my fave pairing, so I'm quite happy with this. I really enjoyed how you described the fighting in the first chapter.

I LOVE this. My god, this has got to be one of the best things I've ever read! I absolutely LOVE the story line aswell, it's a hell of a lot different from what I've read so far in this fandom. Seriously, good work, keep at it. I'm on my fuckin' knees bowing for you in respect XD

UPDATE PWEASE!

Wow. This fic is written out very well o_o! I'm looking forward to more, even though this hasn't been updated in, er, a very long time. XD Anyway... hope to hear from you sometime [soon, preferably]!

Woah...this fic is just, to be frank, amazing. I was so emotional reading it! It also helps that I'm a Sephiroth/Zack lover but this fic was just awesome! You must continue!

continue please

Excellent job, fantastic story! I was very intruiged by the plot and I can't wait for more! Excellent job!