Very nice.

I like the way you discribe the god's feelings and thaughts so in-depth.

I'm really looking forward to read more of this, maybe even a little bit of Persephone...?

Well, one can hope.

Love,

Amrei

I adore it! Kudos. So far Artemis has been my favorite.

I like your writing very much, all of the chapters were very nice. the chapters about Artemis,Demeter,and Hestia almos made me cry. I can't wait to see Athena's chapter. Great work

wow is Apollo a jerk!

loved it! I hope you continue/update the story!

Aw...poor Artemis.

Wow, I'm loving all of this! Great writing!

Dear Briar Hecate:

I tremendously enjoyed reading all 6 chapters and hope you continue to write POV of all main gods of Olympus. I am trying to pick up which one I like best, and frankly I can't choose, each one of them is different and gives the great insight into the hearts of those gods. Mind you, none of the 6 deities whose thoughts you already showed us are my favorites - Apollo is most dear to my heart and next one probably Hermes.

The quotations that you put in the beginning of each chapter add so much to the story; I would even say each of them is a story in itself.

Thanks for sharing this everybody and best wishes,

Delos13

Poor Artemis. This was amazing. I wish there were more to read. You write very well.

Aw, how sweet!

Oh, poor Hera, but she gets back in her own way, doesn't she?

Short, but well written.

Wow amazing, A new light to old character that i have read almost too much about. Very deep thinking, I love it!

Great story! I really loved this, especially the latest one. The tale of Orion always made me a bit sad. Thanks for writing this. God bless!