Ahhhh, I loved this fanfic! Dont listen to the other commenters, this is your fanfic that you created, and if it seems unrealistic, it may be because its a fanFICTION. Anyways, loved the ending and Sasu and Naru's past and their journey to their current relationship

I usually like some of your stories, but had to quit at chapter 3? Sasuke rapes Naruto and all is well? makes no sense. Rape isn't romantic

Apart from the language and grammar the plot was all kinds of fucked up, stop romanticizing rape

some parts didnt make sense but i would give this fic a thumbs up

I'm coming back to all these recently and I've got to say they're just so good I love all of your fics I don't even know if you're going to read this but thank you for all of these. These were the first fics I've ever read and I'm glad I got the right introduction to this world.

This kind of story is not believable or rape isn't as traumatic as I thought. I would expect Naruto to be 'slightly' more upset over being violated by your ex-friend. And not spread his legs so easily every next time Sasuke got 'horny'. I wouldn't even entertain a thought of being a fuck-buddy of someone, who supposedly had sicced his friends on me to beat and rape me. Why was that matter discussed at the end of the fic, only when they admitted to their feelings?
It's not a good idea to build drama on so serious topics, if main characters don't act the way they should, when faced with them. If they are twisted like that (Uchiha's an asshole, but Naruto doesn't protest much either), I cannot like or care about them.

Some plot twists seemed out of nowhere. Like Naruto liking Sasuke since middle school. We had the whole narration from Naruto's POV, so there should have been hints on that, because there would be much more tension between them in early chapters. When you get back to lines like "He didn't know why Sasuke hated him so much, but the young raven seemed to have something against the blonde designer." (chapter 1), they stop making much sense in retrospect.

What the fuck, this sucks, there is absolutely no character development. Waste of time.

Are u serious... So basically, Sasuke rapes Naruto and forces him to have sex with him multiple times, and all is just forgiven... REALLY. Okay. And even after all that shit in private school and him assaulting Naruto, Sasuke tries to comfort Naruto and acts like he's protecting him from Itachi? I can't even comprehend this thought process.

So Yeah... I reaf a few of your stories and they are all really good and amusing, but if you don't mind, could I ask for a little favor? Would you mind give me the list of your Sasunaru story? It's not that I don't like Narusasu, Sasunarusasu, or Narusasunaru stories, it just that , they are kinda my OTP, will you?

I loved this!

If u feel like it, canu make a sequel where sasuke asks Naruto to marry him or something.
Lovd this fanfiction sooooo much _

Oh sorry I'm pissed of right now I hate naruto in this fic after he raped you say I know that you're not an a**hole
I can't continue this fic

just one word to say AMAIZING the story,the lemon ,the start and the end all was great just to wish you courage i really appreciate your story you have great imaginations and i love hope to read more of your story continue like that

Sasuke said the word "horny" a lot of times haha :D
The way Naruto's and Sasuke's story started, my heart would just break whenever Sasuke was mean to Naruto. But as the story went on, it was focused on their emotional situation. It was quite different. In one part, there's this line "Sasuke had expected this, but it still hurt." I WAS SOBBING LIKE LITTLE POPPY, IT WAS SO SAD T.T

I just knew that Itachi was being nice to him for all the wrong reasons. I mean really, Itachi? Hinata? HINATA?! Not gonna complain (because SasuNaru rocks!) But you've got a hot blond thats in love with you, helloooo?

I can surely that gentleness is a turn on for me, and when Itachi said he was getting married and Sasuke was being sweet...*FAN GIRL MODE ON* (_)

anyways, nice plot, amazingly written and well... awesome!

I LOVED IT!

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