This was a great story! It was so emotional and beautiful. it made me cry.

I know this story is a few years old,but I just wanted to let you know not all blind peoples eyes look dead. A lot of them you wouldn't always be able to tell just by looking at their eyes. Also,I'll assume he's part of the 10% but only 10% of blind people actually can't see anything. 90% of them have very little sight left. For example,one could see light and shadows.

I literally read the whole story in a day it was amazing it made me cry in a few spots and I don’t cry. You did an amazing job ٩(‿)۶

I love this story! It's so original! :D

your storys always wow me and make me cry at one point

I love the story so much! I hope u make a part two to the story :)

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Yes! I finished! It was a wonderful story. :)

You know you score big points for creativity because you do things no one else has done, and execute them beautiful! Luv it!

I know you probably won't read this but future advise you know. The story is good but I have read many lemons and its nice to see it done differently but maybe make it less vocal and it should improve.

Hahaha! Nice job on the date n loved the small part with yami and atem.

this story give me an inspiration

I never knew what lemon ment before this... I like it *perv face*

Solomon speaks true words. :( my birth parents were never married.. Now I am stuck with one hell of a pain in the ass brother, an over repedetive fri**%# mother, and a kind caring dad. I never knew my father. D':

Wow great first chappy. I liked it. The way Yugi was it was great! Betting in two days better! Just thinking of who in the world wold adapt tha fast... Anyways great chap!