Hello!AUTHOR-SAMA I BEG OF YOU PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE A FRI'IN CLIFFHANGER!upadet soon!:):):):)'

continue with more chapters or i will kill you with the baka gun!evil laughhhh

aww persona has asof spot 4 nobara and mikan...

I cant believe it! I recognize who Nanoha is! I LOVE Magical Lyrical! This fanfic has become 10000000 times better!

I cant wait to see wht happens next. Im hoping this fanfic is MikanxNatsume. I LOVE that couple! Its also amazing that Aoi Hyuuga is in this. I wonder how Natsume will react to seeing his sister.

Well thats all I wanted to say! I hope this fanfic will contine being this good or get better.

p.s. I hage Luna so... yeah... Goodbye!

Still ongoing ? I wanna know what happens! :)

This is a really good story! I hope that you'll update soon!

you seemed like you needed it so i did

wooow love this update soon for such a good story u deserve more reviews yo no that

WOW... Who knew that in this story Luna was Mikan's ssister or other half... Wonder how they're gonna react if they find out that Luna was the one that gave Mikan the burns. Would Luna gain regain her memories and change sides?

LOL THAT WAS HILARIOUS I can totally see Retsu and Mikan together GO RETSUXMIKAN FUCK YOU NATSUMEXMIKAN *fist pump* XP

NOO! Why must there not be another chapter out yet? Please hurry, I can't wait to see what else is going to happen... YOU LEFT A FREAKING CLIFF HANGER HERE! Oooo I just can't wait, it's just to good of a story!

NATSYME AND MIKAN. END OF STORY. IF U DINT SO HELP ME...

I love your story. I adore the direction its going. But the tid bit bout mikans mom...well its kinda forgotten. Is it a big part or just a lil puzzle piece? Be

Great chapter.

WOW...Retsu and Natsume's pretty aggresive there. But what about Mikan's other half? And Koizumi Luna? What about...ARGH! So many questions I wanna KNOW! Owwhhh...I hope you'll update sooner. By the way, your story...ROCKS! HAHAH!