#whenyoureadastory #andit'sperfection

Sorry, I just thought this story was absolutely incredible. What makes your writing so great is that you don't simply state what's happening, but further explain it in a non-physical way (if that makes sense). It's just so good and adds so much more to your story!

There aren't many stories that have moved me enough to want to write a legitimate, somewhat decent review (where I properly express how bloody amazing I think the writing is), but damn, your writing talent alone is something that should be praised for being so moving, description and absolutely beautiful. You're awesome storyline and cute ship only adds to the enjoyment. I swear, even if you'd written about my NOTP, I still would have admired your writing skills and plotline.

I just cannot express enough how amazing your story is. Sorry for rambling so much _'

That was amazing

you sure as fuck can write.

beautiful story!

This is my second story I have read of yours, and I just thought I would let you know that your talent from writing is rather incredible. Its so realistic and yet a complete fantasy. You really should consider writing as a career. I love how I get to see Kaoru's perspective so seamlessly, and its all just fantastic.

On the story itself, I almost demand a second story to this. To see this relationship progress further would be a joy and privilege. I would not change a single character on this story besides that however. Its rather perfect, like the rest of your work.

Oh. oh, wow. This was absolutely amazing. I honestly don't think I've ever read a better Hikaru/Kaoru fiction before...

This was extremely well written; the prose was enthralling and your descriptions were tantalizing. I love the emotion that shows through in the twins. This is fabulous-you are an amazing writer.

Wow. Just amazing. This - your writing, the story, everything - is captivating and incredable. That's all I can say.

*favorites*

Do u still read this?Idk but I want to say i appreciate your work on this one!My favorite kind of one shots are the long ones(like this one :/ )So thank you for the great work!

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I truly enjoyed this story. I have been reading a lot of Kaoru and Hikaru stories for the past few days, and I have to say that this is one of the best that I have read. It was well developed and put together.

If any thing bad could be said, is that I would have hoped for it to be longer and for the story to continue (which is more of a complment than anything negitive ;P) Have you ever though of writting a sequel where there relationship developes even more. Because from my point of view this story still has more to be told. You have a real talant.

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This story was AMAZING! It has to be the best twincest I've read yet! I love the play of emotions that you captured so well! It had me on the edge of my seat and left me wanting more! Keep up the fab writing and thank you for sharing!

Holy shit, that was AWESOME! This is really good and I loved it!

Wow. Um, so, first of all: shut the fuck up. You're a thousand times better than 99% of everyone else on this site. And yes there were a few typos and grammatical errors, but nothing that could be held against you. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Hikaru & Kaoru are my favorite couple ever right now, and I got all kinds of warm and fuzzy inside when I read this very well-written take on their non-existent love affair. I loved the way you made it fit their character instead of creating your own history and discarding all established knowledge about them. I loved the way you used big bad scary words, in the correct context. I loved how it stretched for thirteen hundred plus words without being broken by chapters or injected with filler or seeming like a ramble. I basically just loved it. Very well done, miss. You have my congratulations and gratitude.

this is just...amazing (inset emphasas here)

I just...can't describe how much this story means to me (yes Your story now has sentimental value to me) It's just so... just wow

I LOVE THIS!

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I loved this. It's probably the best Hika x Kao fic I've ever read. And I'm not just saying that, either. I mean it.