Who is in the harem

one of the best naruto/karin stories I've ever read to bad the stories are limited in numbers... update soon please! BTW the chapter is very good...

I love it! Update again soon! Really soon!

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Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

An awesomely amazing fic. Its a fascinating fic. With a great sub character in Karin.

I don't really understand the purpose of this fic. You labelled it as General/Adventure, but it's more Angst and Romance.

Also, the fic is riddled with problems. And not just grammatical ones.

Naruto was looking for a power to suppliment the Kyuubi? He doesn't even rely on the Kyuubi in canon so (unless it's completely AU, and he decides to continue using Kyuubi after attacking Sakura while in the Kyuubi Cloak), that entire thing doesn't make sense.

You say that Hinata is not a close range fighter, yet the Hyuuga clan are feared around the world because of their Taijutsu style.

I feel like I could pick at the Tenten/Naruto relationship, and the Naruto/Karin, but it's all given reasoning behind it (even if the logic doesn't make all that much sense.)

Lastly: Why on earth would Kakashi discuss Naruto's problems with Suna and Kumo? They have nothing to do with them- even if they are Naruto's friends, they are also Villages that are in competition with Konoha!

Regardless, I hope your next updates turn out well- good luck on the rest of your story.

keep up the good work, it's interesting seeing an angsty naruto when done right.

Good chapter lol he got laid once more. Geez. I cant believe it hes coming back slowly though.

Great story, keep up the good work.

Please don't add Sakura or Hinata into the harem there are way too many fics of the two of them and we don't need anymore. I would prefer you keep the harem Naruto/Karin/Kin? and who ever you decide to add.

Okay on some things I think your moving a bit to fast like relationship wise and the only other thing I'm gonna complain about is Hinata's not a close range fighter? Have you even read the manga or watch the anime? That's what her clan excels at. It was interesting at first but some of the crap that you wrote in here just didn't make any sense.

The scene with Sakura... The random yelling, all angsty, eugh, wtf? Naruto is too freaking emo.

nice!