Nice start of story, too bad it was never finished.

And thus begenith and eight year two month silence on a promise to timely finish.

Okay, I'm going to post this here. I may not be able to finish Ch. 8 before I leave for Terkey Day with my grand kids. There's a clown reposting your work. Legally, I know there is nothing we can do about it but you could probably get it removed and his sorry bum removed, at least in his/her/it's current form posting as "Wizard97). Perhaps this might be an incentive not to let a story hang around here un-attended for 9 years.

I find this story's name highly degrading!

You should have named this fic 'Castration'. Mediocre writing and a horrendous plot!

Good history, a shame you never uodate it beyond this

My god this is bad, like epic bad.

Gets beaten at home, told a story by people that call him names and degrade him, but decides to go with them. Then once they have him they lock him up, betray his secrets, stun him and examine him on a table, all without his agreement. And he just goes along with it? Why does he trust them? Why put up with the humiliation of constantly being put down? Why allow them to treat him like shit? There isn't one time they have done anything for him at this point or tried to help him in anyway.

interesting and engaging and mildly disturbing a very different take on harry being rescued by daphne storyline. though at this juncture its probably futile to look for a continuation, it wouldbe interesting to see the wizengamot session. hope you are doing something worthy, this well written

ap Aidan

hello again his name is Luke fraser not foster

just so u know some iditot has plaged ur storie i have repported him. and the idiot goes by the name luke foster i loved ur story so when i started to read it i thought it was new material but it was not u so needeed to find u to tell u. it's sad that people can't leave since stories alone even though they have gone years with out uppdat unless given away or with other types of permission and ps the idiot have still the same name as urs

But I seriously doubt there will be a next chapter and that you will even see this review.. Too bad. Nine plus years in hiatus just invites the gaggle of interlopers.

There is a knucklehead who reproduced your first chapter word for word today on this site. LUKE FRASER is the name he listed the story under. I'd really like to read the rest of a well written story and would urge you to finish it if possible. It might put an end to the useless knucklehead's idiocy. Everyone realizes if you write it on this site it's pointless to object to thievery, but it would be nice to give them a kick in the pants for their rudeness.

You might want to address an interloper that published your first chapter of this story *not the prologue) as their own work. I'm sure it will vanish like HP smoke but the "writer" ( and I use the term VERY LOSELY) is Patriots24

It looks like the person that has been going around stealing stories has stolen yours. s/13221594/1/Snakecharmer

your Harry is very ooc. As in random angsty dramatic scars on his back that he just whips out to prove a point? nah don't think so.. why? bc he's hung out with a girl he's never spoken to before but after spending three weeks with he's all of a sudden an open book? Maybe get a firmer grasp on your characters personality traits and general dispositions