Hah, I needed to start reading another fic of yours, since I finished TSFMS, and ended up picking this one.
I am intrigued to see how this progresses!

Oh wow, I see trouble up ahead, and now I wont be able to stop thinking about this! matt's tottaly..and mello...wow. i loved this :D

THIS STORY HAD ME VERY NERVOUS I WAS SO SCARED FOR MATT. EXCELLENT PACING AND WRITING. THE ENDING WAS CUTE. I LIKE THIS VERSION OF MATT. EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT.

Yep, I wanna kill you. But then where would I get the AWESOME MattxMello fics? You live for now...

This was a fantastic story with a wonderful ending:) I really enjoyed it!

Lol this story is kinda fu**ed up in a good way. I don't usually read stories like this, but i really liked it _

WHAT
WHAT
WHAT
I CAN'T EVEN
I was sobbing and hurting and dying and RAWR your writing is amazing I love you

Wow. It was so good. Lately I've become obsessed with ur stories! I love reading them. Oh one more thing check out a story called Second Chances by Otakukid1996. Its a DN fic. I thought it perfectly captured Lights and Ls perspective. It really sounded like them. I think u might like it. Its a new story so check it out. Again ur an amazing writer!

While I was reading, i thought 'wow, why am i reading this, its so fucked up and insane!'. And then the last chapter came. And suddenly, just like Mello, i felt that every weird thing that Matt did was an act of love (is it good gramatically? xD). Thanks for messing my mind like that!
And come back to TSFMS soon please 3.

I really like that fic! :)
Even though Matt is damn psycho, it still is totally cute, what he does for Mello! :3
I think it's a very odd proposal of marriage, but it's still.. uhm.. something special :P

I understand how you feel :) I hope that the death note yaoi fandom comes back as to all other fandoms. By the way, is Matt the only insane one or are both of them crazy? I think I am addicted to this fic! I hope you make more dark fics like these!

Wow... I'm honestly not sure what to think about how fucked up that was... XD but at the same rime it was great. As always, wonderful writing, wonderful story.

Well, I read it, and I have to say... that this is one of the most satisfying ending I"ve ever read. It's well-suited to the story and it made me smile. It was articulate without being over-bearing. And it was very much pleasing. You expressed their feelings well, adn I felt for both of them.

Throughout the whole story, I had a horrid feelign that things would end badly (not sure why, though), but I"m glad things went this way with your plot. Amazing. A work of art.

If this wasn't fanfiction, I'd be yellin': "QUICK, SOMEONE CALL A PUBLISHER!"

Soo... sorry it took me so long to read and review. I'm pressed for time and running behind, but I shall review anyway!

Now, it is an understatement to say that this was a great chappie! And... as for the ending... OMG! I didn't expect Mello to be there! now, I must make time to read ch17!

-I'd say more, but I'm in a hurry! Sorry.

Awww, that was a cute ending. :) The whole thing with the GPS chip was really a bit crazy. xD I absolutely love how you inserted this "lion and lamb"-thing. :) Great fanfic.