Absolutely gorgeous story

This was a wonderful story. The only criticism I have is that sometimes it was hard to follow the changing scene, maybe put a line when the scenes change?

It's scary how much I relate to Al. You've captured all of them so wonderfully. People say that forgiving is a very hard thing, but I think that apologizing sincerely can be harder.

Kudos to you and your story.

Cute as fuck dude. Cheers.

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A wonderful story, full of angst, yes, but still wonderful. Your family and kids psychology is amazing.

ASS xD

This is beyond beautiful especially the ending. It was perfect. Your writing is excellent, and the resentment that Al is burdened with is portrayed masterfully. Loved it.

*there are about 1000000000 swords in my heart and 900000000 of them are from this fanfic the other 100000000 being from that one fic where Light carved happy Valentine's Day L on his arm and died from blood loss*

Hello,
I wanted to ask you, if your text was already translated to polish? It's a really cute and lovely story, and it would be very kind of you, if you let me translate it :)
I hope you did't forget about this text, I see it's like seven years since you published it...

This hurt. A lot. It's so heartbreaking. But I loved it all the same. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story which tore my heart to pieces in a way nothing else ever has before, yet still left me with a small smile and a feeling of hope for Al and Scorpius. :)

This was very well-written, and it really captured what I thought the epilougue should have told- Al probably felt some sort of resentment towards his father, and most likely it would only be him because he was the only one who looks like him. I love how you had the side-Drarry, yet it still played an important role in the story. Al's anger was not justified to others, but I could see where it was coming from, and his thoughts mirrored that resentment perfectly. Amazing story

I absolutely loved this! Your writing was fantastic, three story was great, and so was the characterization. I loved the way you perfectly painted Albus and Scorpius' relationship but didn't make the story ALL about them. I loved the touch of darkness and angst, but also all the small cute moments with Al and Scorpius, and also Draco and Harry. Also, the way you threw in the occasional funny bit (ex. "Excuse me? You're also in love with yourself?") so it wasn't entirely serious. I loved the way you described Al' s fractured relationship with his father and how it's started to heal, but it wasn't like "oh I did something awful to you but I apologized and I feel bad so it's all good now". Also, I've always imagined Al resenting his father ever since I read the epilogue so thank you for writing this story. :) Anyways, I applaud you for this. Great job!

o liki so much this fic. Its fantanstic .. I love love love, gradulations )

What a beautiful story of love and friendship. I am very happy and I'm always surprised at how well you write and develops a narrative.