wow! great fic!
when will the next one started? i can't wait

Awesome story, good job!

I really enjoyed the entire thing, and your spelling is great. I really love how you made the characters at and such.

The story's awesome so far! Keep up the great work!

Agni and Rudra sounds very familiar but still it's all good. Keep it up and see you next chapter.

I like this story so far. It's really enjoyable and fun. Also, I love how the characters' personalities are.

I hope to read more enjoyable chapters in the future.

Oh dear, now Nelius has to deal with a double team assault from both Radara and Esara. Frankly, I don't understand why he was complaining in the first place, but hey! There's many mysteries surrounding him at the moment, am I right? :P

very good. Its the best one i have ever read so far. You should add a little more suspense

Liking this a lot, I'm still reading so expect some more reviews from me. It's an OC fic with some interesting characters, which is great. Looking forward to more updates.

Very good story, thought a bit perverted it's all good.