Reviews for Pay Attention Ellis
Garath Webb chapter 1 . 3/29/2018
This story was great.
I was wondering if maybe you could do a story where Ellis has sex with a Witch
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2017
holy fs this was amazing
SmashMaster9000 chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
You know a story is good when you can hear the characters voices in your head while you read their lines.
noladarling chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Still one of my favorite fics!
Zwaggerine chapter 1 . 4/14/2016
Super hot.I must say Winter that u r worth of a 's th most sexy story I've ever read in my it's way too intimate for a 12yr old like me but still keep up writing more ellis/rochelle.I'm so in love with this couple.K ,enough of me .Luv up the good work.
With best wishes,
Zwaggerine;-)
Gretzan chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
haha. nice story exetremely funny ending please make more!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
funny,cute story,although u could cut out the swearing,people can write romance stories w/out sewaring but, a good story all 'n all.
L33sy chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
i loved this! the ending was cute and funny. very nice job :D
SlytheCat202 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Teeheehee! Awesome! Totally in character, humorous, cute... can totally see this occurring. Great job at capturing everyone and the setting. I certainly enjoyed your fanfiction. :)
leeshxcore chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
i really liked this. theres not a lot of ellis/ro romance, but i think they make a good pairing. i thought them in the shower was cute.
Echokid14 chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
good story I love Ellis and Rochelle to I always play as one or the other. I also love them as a couple which to me only makes sense. (in the game they have the most friendly interactions) THis was a good fic keep up the good work!

Echokid14
Neon chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
This was amazing! Out of the Survivors, these two are my favorite couple. You captured their personalities perfectly and this was a joy to read! Very nicely done.
two-headed fiesta chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
absolutely precious! i love the personalities you've created for them. (:
soleillunalover chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I loved your story. I actually laughed at loud like 2 or 3 times. Very well written please write more of this pairing.

BTW your an amazing writer I m definitely going to check out more of your stuff.
mangamaster1303 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
WICKED! Normally, i steer clear of this couple, but i heard good things from people, and boy were right! I still prefer Zoey-Ellis better, but this story still rocked. Whatever your doing keep it up! And, *Nervous rubs back of head* i have a story request if you dont care? All i have is the title, and i hope you could write the story for me? I know i'm a coward and just having the title may not be a lot, but i do have the summary you could use. Anyway, if you do this, all credit goes to you, i swear! I'll be looking for it! (i don't post on here, thats why i have to stick with secret reviews) Heres the title-Fallen Hero. The couple? Ellis-Zoey of course with some hints of Nick-Rochelle is what i was thinking. Heres my summary for it, use it or not-Ellis sacrifices himself to save everyone from a tank, as he is laying in the safehouse dying, what does he do with his remaing time? What does he say?-sucks i know. Well... thats it. BUT... i have one request. If your going to change the couples, PLEASE no guy-guy pairings! Honestly, to me, they make a mockery of whatever characters they use and fanfiction should ban Yaoi stories! Yuri though... I'll get back to you on that. (what do you want from me? I'm a 16-year-old Junior in high school for christs sake!) Let me know please!
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