MORE!

I think ur story has a good plot line, albeit one tht has been done before, but i really got tired of bellas character, within like the first 4 paragraphs she had already cried "hysterically" like 3 times, seriously, it was like every time i read through a paragraph she was either crying or screaming in it, after 10 yrs in an orphanage i expect u wood learn to be a hardened mask tht reveals no weakness, no crying. it got kind of tiring, i wanted 2 tell bella to grow a pair. try and make her character stronger, everyone enjoys a good strong female lead not some wimpy crybaby. just somme constructed critisism,

awsome plz do more!

cool

please update. I like this story a lot.

it's really good! write more please and i want to know what happened to bellas mum and dad and her past, update soon x

write back, edwardsminetwilightluva

aw edward really likes her dont he

whatts going to happen at the shrinks

update soon

did her parents deaths have something to do with needles were they drugged

aww her and edward have a bond already

glad there going to be in the same classes

update soon

I'm curious to see where this goes :) more soon please.

Well I think that's a really good start and I can't wait to read more of this story. Please update soon!

PS I like your idea! )