Reviews for Silently Waiting |
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![]() ![]() I think ur story has a good plot line, albeit one tht has been done before, but i really got tired of bellas character, within like the first 4 paragraphs she had already cried "hysterically" like 3 times, seriously, it was like every time i read through a paragraph she was either crying or screaming in it, after 10 yrs in an orphanage i expect u wood learn to be a hardened mask tht reveals no weakness, no crying. it got kind of tiring, i wanted 2 tell bella to grow a pair. try and make her character stronger, everyone enjoys a good strong female lead not some wimpy crybaby. just somme constructed critisism, |
![]() ![]() ![]() awsome plz do more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update. I like this story a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's really good! write more please and i want to know what happened to bellas mum and dad and her past, update soon x write back, edwardsminetwilightluva |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw edward really likes her dont he whatts going to happen at the shrinks update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() did her parents deaths have something to do with needles were they drugged aww her and edward have a bond already glad there going to be in the same classes update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious to see where this goes :) more soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I think that's a really good start and I can't wait to read more of this story. Please update soon! PS I like your idea! ) |