Still the worst SasuSaku fic there is out there. It’s so fucking horrible. You ruined Sasuke and Minato. Disgusting.

I really like this Sasuke's POV. Maybe even more than Sakura's.

Cool story love it xd

Awesome!

You forgot to explain what sharingan is. Since it's a AU and Sasuke is a normal person, it would only be right to explain it. He could have just said "Weird genetics. My eyes turn red when I'm mad. We Uchihas call it sharingan."Also, I read Sakura's POV. When Sasuke forced her to say how old she was when she first had sex, I almost wished for sakura to run out the house, do the deed with someone else and tell Sasuke later when she see him,"I was eighteen when I first had sex, you bastard."But then I read Sasuke's POV and was glad that my 'almost wish' didn't come true. Anyway I enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing both POVs. Please update Sakura's epic fails.

I read Sakura's POV first. My thought about Sasuke was that he was an arrogant,sex-addicted, over possessive bastard who enjoyed hurting Sakura whenever she did something he disliked, yet still deluded himself into believing he was in love with her. But Sasuke's POV made me understand what he was thinking about everytime he hurt Sakura.I now accept him as truly in love with Sakura and not just lusting after her. Your plot is great and makes so much sense. It's predictable and unpredictable at the same time. I loved it. But there are so many spelling mistakes. Also you use the wrong words in many example you used "stuffing her giggles" but the suitable words are "stifling her giggles".So, work on them please and update the sequel.

You mixed up a lot of easy words. Like 'where' and 'we're'. And 'generally' and 'genuinely'. Just because 2 words sound similar, doesn't mean they can be replacements for each other.

I was a little disappointed of the fact that while Sasuke had relationships with other women and always got some action, Sakura had to be the good girl and wait for him to get all her 'firsts'.
Just a little opinion, don't take anything personal :) Anyway, quite liked the story. Already read the prequel and liked that too.

i can't wait to get started on the sequel! oh yeah, that's right, sasuke forgot to finish the room... Naruto all scared of this best friend :) i knew he would sell Sakura to save himself from the wrath of sasuke . . .

Definitely a great story I thoroughly enjoyed.

It's cute, but this is just my opinion. I find it unfair for Sakura's part that she is not Sasuke's first, after the mental torture he gave her all these years. It's quite surprisin how Sakura here managed to keep her firsts.

Nice to know Sasuke's point of view :D

come back and finish your stories... please

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LOVE IT! Just like the other one. Gonna check out the sequel.