I love this! I had also read Terror Gold and it gave me chills. This was a great follow up, and I love how you hinted that Peter, Edmund, and Lucy may have had potential love interests back in Narnia. It adds another note of tragedy into the four siblings leaving Narnia. I understand that the movie had to avoid cluttering the plot, but I wish they had developed a bit more on the past life of the Pevensies.

Oh, LORD, that was amazing. Beautiful, chilling, breathtaking, so... final. Keep writing. Keep writing!

P.S. I am of the opinion that both Susan and Lucy had orders as well, but it IS your story...

Oh my Gosh! Seriously the best! Your control over the English language is amazing, and this one-shot sent shivers down my spine.

I. LOVED. IT

'I am with you to the death'. Reference to Oreius? *tears*

Beautifully done. :)

In case you even read reviews on work this old, this was beautifully, movingly written. A fit companion to "Terror Gold." Thank you.

I'm so glad to have found a wonderful continuation to Lirenel's Terror Gold. Love it.

AMAZING! AMAZING! AMAZING!
I READ TERROR GOLD A FEW DAYS AGO.
and now i found this fanfic..
I truly loves Terror Gold, because Edmund is my favorite Narnia character..
and it was amazing how Peter reacts at Edmund being tortured
I think this was amazing.. with Terror Gold i feel like something was missing
It was Edmund coming back from the Telmarine's tent.. and the reaction of Peter and Lucy and Susan.. and it was wonderful too how Caspian understood, and Edmund speech! WOW! THAT WAS SO FANTASTIC! It was really a King's speech. And the fact that Ed is the only one who can bring Peter to reality Its really cute.

And Caspian vision! seing them as the King of Old! wow.. i can say i actually saw the same thing along with Caspian! really..

A wonderful, perfect, amazing, cool, touching and cute fanfic.

Wow. Just wow.

When I read "Terror Gold", I didn't think that anything could be better. Then I read this. It is beautifully written and it captures the characters so well. I am so impressed! It actually made me cry at one point!

Keep on writing! You'll be an author one day. Just wait! :)

Aw...I think this was an absolutely amazing continuation to Lirenel's "Terror Gold." You captured the characteristics between the brothers and Caspian so well, as well as bringing a sort of end to the conflict between Caspian and Peter. I just absolutely loved your continuation.

Gloriously beautiful.

Well done.

You've done it again, my friend. This is spectacular. I've just read Lirenel's "Terror Gold" and then had to come and read your continuation. I'm absolutely speechless...the depth of emotions that you conveyed was stupendous. *flail* I'll be re-reading this many times, I'm sure. Wonderful job )

Oh... wow! I'm in complete awe of how well this is done! Beautiful!

This is amazing! I loved every single bit of it. It's a worthy sequel to Lirenel's Terror Gold. No scratch that, it's not worthy, it's more than worthy. I love how detailed you are. There aren't many writers who can put in so much detail as you have. (I think you put even more detail in this story than I ususally do with my chapters, which tend to be filled with detail and such.) Again, very amazing.

*Adds story to favorites*

Beautiful sequel! (I loved that story too) You did a great job on this story!