i just read this and i am so in love with it do you think you could write a sequel

I just read this and really loved it. I just knew at the end that Bella was going to kill him because she would be crazy, too, just in a different. I was glad to be wrong.

Surprisingly good! Do u think you could write a sequel?

OMG i loved it!

...WoW! I loved this. You should toataly go with a sries on this. REALLY!

That was unexpected. Three characters in one Edward and two characters in one Bella. Like has certainly attracted like in this strange, dark, twisted one-shot. The progression was neat and the concept well-executed.

~ Udo

ohh snap she crazy like edward i think i starting to love this story a lot!good job!

wow this is really great! love dark bella and edward!

Wow. Just.. Wow.

That was so different. It was kinda creepy, but I liked how it wasn't all lovey and sweet the whole way through, thought they are good too, I liked how differnt it was too. I've said different alot. Different, different, different. I'm gonna stop now, cause I'm starting to annoy myself, so I'm sure I'm annoying you.

Ohh, I really loved the ending by the way. Perfect. Totally explained why she smiled when Edward pulled out the knife. I got a bit confused for a second there.

All in all, very good story :D

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Awesome story! It would be perfect for a short story! What happen to Leah anyway? She got kill?

loved it!

Great story! loved the way they all have split personalities!

Anthony sounds so evil, Cullen sounds kinda fun too...Edward is my kinda guy though, cuz he sounds like he has a heart.

Wow, that was just wow. Nice ending. No wonder Bella..er.. Marie was so nonchalant about the whole thing.

Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed the story.

Thank you for joining the contest.

That was great! I think all five of them were pretty satisfied at the end!

The reveal at the end was great!