This chapter sucks in the sense life happens and it's rare that someone gets there happily ever after at 18

:) loved this story

Your writing is beautiful but boy were these two a bunch of immature idiots. So selfish, and yet, I'm happy for them.

I don't understand why Edward's doing this to Chelsea? Just break up with her. It's better than cheating on her.

*sigh* these assholes... I hate cheaters and home-wreckers.

Jane should have taken a picture of them together and asked "since it's 'nothing', do you mind if I send this to Edward's girlfriend?" See how they react then. Assholes. Bella is actually worse than Jane's stepmom because at least she wasn't aware. Bella knows exactly what she's doing.

I have a feeling Jane likes Bella.

I've been trying to figure out what's off about this story for me, and I think its the discrepancy of the age. They're supposed to be seniors in high school, and they're having sex, which is accurate, but the conversations and gossip all sound more middle school. IDK maybe that's just for me.

I loved the story even when I Was crying and I cried a lot but was worthy
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

I cried a lot with this chapter. Please tell me that you wrote a happy ending.

Wow I couldn't count how many lovers Bella had in five years.
Sorry for spoil the story

Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ

I really really like this story, you're such a talented writer and I am so happy you let the supernatural thing not be a central part of the story. Actually I prefer to interpret that part as a metaphor for other things. But right now I am so frustrated that Bella lets him treat her like this. It's kind of sadistic and emotional abuse. I don't know how the story could possibly evolve so that this behaviour can be "redeemed." Really interesting though.

I want to cry! Omgggg this entire story was AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!

okay, so I'm trying to work a few things out. firstly, I think Jane is not in Bella's future because she's in love with Bella. I've picked up on a few subtle hints in that department, and secondly, I think Bella got her physic ability from her dad, because that explains why Charles said 'you' the first time he saw Edward and why he seems to be so chill and trusting about her relationship with him. I LOVE being able to put things together like this and I absolutely love this story, its different to anything I've ever read and I just love how detailed Bella's feelings are. whenever she sees hat guy in Edward my heart just.. I love it!

OMG... Why I didn't find this gem before. Loved it so much, so intense... thanks for sharing. Going to read all your stuffs.