Reviews for Out of the Depths
Sedracus chapter 27 . 7/20
I like your fresh perspective on Harry's reaction to Hermione - I can really understand he would be reminded of his aunt Petunia.
Lord rosier chapter 27 . 7/20
Awesome chapter
bdwilliams3 chapter 18 . 7/10
Well done!
bdwilliams3 chapter 16 . 7/10
Excellent chapter!
bdwilliams3 chapter 11 . 7/8
Excellent chapter!
bdwilliams3 chapter 6 . 7/8
Excellent! Enjoying the dynamics btw all characters.
bdwilliams3 chapter 4 . 7/8
No guilt necessary - great story and loving how it is progressing!
bdwilliams3 chapter 2 . 7/8
Excellent!
bdwilliams3 chapter 1 . 7/8
Great start! Feels realistic and good flow. Excited to read more.
Caesar Cruze chapter 27 . 7/2
Harry need to discuss birds and bees with somebody so you can make sex and marriage contract between him and some girls next summer and it can have been written down by parents before dying. This story is goo but need more lemons to keep up reader interest. I dont no how many more chappies i'll be reading if nothing happen!
celiamancera8 chapter 27 . 6/29
Then I just found your story and I'm glad you're back from Hiatus!
I love how you portray the characters and everything!
The little detectives that are done, asked me what will be next.
And I love Harry making friends or allies with each other, I can't wait to see more interactions with people!
SlytherinSupreme chapter 27 . 6/22
The plot thickens...very curious about Harry’s pulsing scare issue.
jadely31 chapter 27 . 6/21
Glad you are back. This was a good chapter even if lots of Quiddich happens (not my favorite). Also, you write the story with a different point of view for the same event. The dispute about who had booked the Quiddich pitch is one an example. Thanks for taking time to write and share.
Sauron chapter 27 . 6/21
I want to preface this by saying you are clearly a talented writer, and I enjoy your work. This is just my personal criticism

But it feels very color within the lines. Like maybe it would be a bit OOC, but I'd like to see Harry questioning more things, doing experiments, doing more research and really bashing against the walls of the world so to speak.

Cheers!
Silver Ame Tsukino chapter 27 . 6/20
Can’t wait to read more!
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