I would have given beastboy three eyes two Rinne'sharingan(the two normal eyes) and the third on his forehead would have been the tenseigan(the evolved stage of the byakugan that in addition to its original abilities gains more thus making it capable of fighting/matching the Rinne'gan at the least if not the Rinne'sharingan)

Some mistakes here and there but nothing to bad. My advice is to get an editor and have them go over the details.
Also the pace of the story is a little fast for me but I can overlook that. All in all it was a interesting read and I hope to see more of this story in the future.

fantastic to see an update and as for 'kibidi nyota moto', i believe its Swahili and in general translates as 'a fiery star', though broken down can be seen in a different light

if Naruto were to make an appearance, I would like him to be female so that he could join Beast Boy harem!

I am looking forward to chapter 5 and I hope Naruto make an appearance.

Ch 5 Well I'm curious. AND assepting the basic instincts with the Flow as part of you and unity would affect in power out put, Control, and self Control AND potent power.

I love it so keep going my friend.

Epic story

Fox Lord is Naruto merged with Kurama and maybe mated to a demon Sakura?

This is very interesting idea, but i think that be very short fanfiction.

Same as the others

I hope you bring this back I know it been a long time

You brought Terra back? Please tell me that this is in no way a BB/Terra!? Like the idea of Scarlet. Maybe Raven and Scarlet and some other hot demoness can share BB.

bbrea al the way love this story

ok u have got to continue this