J'adore c'est drôle.

haha :)

This was brilliant and so much fun. Yes, Neal can seem like a child to the FBI at times but he's adorable and harmless.

hehehe. perfection

Yeah, I can totally see that happening. I busted out laughing when I reach the line "Eould this face ever lie to you?" The answer is: yes. Yes, indeed.

Omg I love it. She shared half of her cookie, she will be spared. And the end with the sticky note. Beautiful.

love this! made me laugh. really enjoyed it.

"She will be spared."
"I've never seen him so angry. Jesus, Neal, what did you DO to him?"

Laughed so hard.
Such hilarity.
Oh god, my ribs hurt.

oh, that's BRILLIANT

gotta love neal giving brandon a hard time!

Yep I can see that. I can SO see that. Especially the signature. It would push me over the edge so quickly, I'd be going crazy hunting down every. single. piece. of paperwork.

I laughed so hard! :D

"God bless beaurocracy."

"Honest. Would this face ever lie to you?"

Love the glib little tongue in cheek pokes.

(Yes and I'm sure someone has already given you the spelling gears for bureaucracy But I'm giving you a thumbs up for a new combo word and definition "beau-roc-racy" - that is where the handsome (beau) guy makes up his own rules and rocks the life of everyone around him and gets away with it because of a racy smile. ;)

Cheers G

Lol love it, brilliantly funny, thanks :-)

ROTFL! Go, Neal!

And this little paragraph:
"Of course, the hat is back on his head the minute Brandon leaves the conference room long enough for him to pick the lock, but he refuses to consult for the rest of the day. He just sits there and glares at Brandon and no, he is most certainly not pouting, no matter what Peter might imply about him and woeful, kicked puppies."
- That was pure genius! And had me laughing out loud for real :D

Awesome story!