Reviews for Demigod
Ryu wolf chapter 14 . 6/12
Great job with this chapter can’t wait to read the next one
gabelou1991 chapter 3 . 6/4
Je me demande comment réellement comment il aurait fait si Athéna Zeus et cie serait arrivé car même sans cela j'aurais pris l'enfant.
god of all chapter 14 . 6/3
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
robert krause chapter 3 . 5/25
when get to the inn Naruto get the bed room in the back now a twin size bed was he sleeping on now and when get to put his sword down for when , when took off his jacket now and when eat some food he get out of some shop apple and nuts , when he had a tea too, when reading on the school now , boy why not ,
robert krause chapter 1 . 5/25
when Naruto had get made new swords out of 1 is wolf nights the 2 is fire fox and last is of eyes blue ice and mind walking , when Naruto made them he be to others realms like egly when he took on the evil spells WZ made mad mob and his 2 , when get the eye of olds and sword Naruto get them both ,then bire mummy e, when used it for when he keep it and was taping fire m and bowl up ones and made it good too, when keeping his stuff Naruto was back home now, when doing others stuff like made pace with Greek 1 gods and Goddess the tatins when one of them made Naruto new stuff too like a moon eye when the mind ones had gave him a big black cape he made part of it now and net vs sea , when his new looking was cool now,
bella.beau.14 chapter 14 . 5/21
More please its really good
robert krause chapter 6 . 5/12
sir i Robert Krause get to think why not let Naruto had living in the whirlpool and fuck off the vaillge and took sarkura as his wife side kid and help her out to be a super ninja and queen of guns ,when then the 2 working vs bad guys and woman like and used the mob money too and made a new vaillge in the whirlpool and it is in the caves when the sea is in it now and used a Julke ship the 2 used to moving about and living on the ship too when she had a bed room and Naruto get one too ,
ryker55mc chapter 1 . 4/24
Hey no offense but grammar bro grammar and get a beta reader
tristanwaltz1 chapter 1 . 3/23
Right more and I love this fanfic!
AnonDovahkiin chapter 2 . 3/12
Seems like a good story, but definitely needs a grammar check or two. Still, good job.
carneyjarred chapter 1 . 3/7
yo do that I will read the mizu kage's name as intended its the beautiful sexy redhead mei terumi
The God of Perverts chapter 5 . 12/31/2019
I'm sad Anko isn't a part of the harem. Didn't Athena make the olive tree or something? My only gripe is that Naruto gives out too much info about his skills. To ninjas information is the greatest weapon. The less the enemy knows about you the better and the more you know about your enemy, the easier it is to kill them.
The God of Perverts chapter 2 . 12/31/2019
Not gonna lie, I expected Zeus to be an asshole. I guess I've been reading too many Percy Jackson stories.
PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
Freya from "God of War 2018" would be interesting for the Harem. I was surprised to find that there aren't fics of her being a mother. Can you imagine the power of a child between her and Sparda's Identical Twin? I've felt that there should have been a female DMC Devil Hybrid. Hell, I am surprised that there are no Saiyan/Devil Hybrid fics out there like I am surprised that there are no Kryptonian/Tamaranian Hybrid fics out there. Imagine a Kryptonian Hybrid that COULD absorb Red sunlight due to their half from Tamaran. It was something that confused me about Superboy from Young Justice until it was revealed that Luthor used his own DNA for the human half which sent some disturbing implications on the relationship between Luthor and Superman if he deliberately made a child between them. If If were a mad scientist I would have spliced the DNA of Power Girl and Starfire or Poison Ivy if I HAD to use Human DNA just to insure that it would be Female. I would also download everything known about their races, Earth, a full education and false memories of me raising them like a loving parent so that they wouldn't turn on me.
dantheman689 chapter 1 . 11/18/2019
Drakai I'm going to guess you've never read the Percy Jackson series?
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