And here i am waiting for a continuation! (Even though i know it's complete) . hahahaha It's so interesting!

Y-you! I can't BELIEVE you ended it at THAT! Why?

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I'm sorry. I just don't understand. This has a great foundation to be a long term story, and frankly, I don't understand why you won't do so. It has great potential, and I'm sure many would love to hear more about this. I NEED to know more about this. It has something in it, that both excites me, and leaves me breathless for more.

That was awesome..! I love Harry's personality in this fic. Make this a multiple chapters story please?

You should have put line breaks to make your story look clean. Minor mistakes. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

*laughs* good job...hmmm...it makes you wonder...what if this had really happened, ne? I loved it!

I'm not quite sure why you have numbers in front of some of your writing, but anyway, you should seriously think about making this a real story and not just a one-shot. It could be very good. :D

I like this please continue this I really like tkis!

Well, then, my dear. Don't leave us hanging. Please continue! :3 I especially love Harry's snarky remark to Hermione about spending too much time in the library. Or the "most be as brilliant as Tom thing" ~giggle~ So, continue, yes?

Complete? Really? this does not bode well with me. it's good and i think you should extend it.

like previous people said.. I was so ready to check next chapter when there was none.. is this really only a one-shot? this could work out to be a really intresting story.

Oh wow. I read all the way to the end and was so ready to click on the next chapter before I remembered that this was only a one-shot. Like FireCookie said, you COULD turn this into a full-fledged story quite easily. It's a wonderful story. Bravo! :D

is this stayingas a one-shot?Cause you could write a whole story based on this *-*