You are great at foreshadowing. Everything up to this moment seems to foreshadow it,

Well... I read this far. But couldn't go further. It wasn't because of your writing or plot lines, because both are good. You write smoothly if not a little... Too much detail for my taste. And I do enjoy the base plot line of Hound's life being a slave to Thundercracker. But, the reason I stopped is because I was disappointed with how you wrote Hound. Despite how nice Thundercracker is, Hound would hate him longer then just 3 chapters. The reason of him being a slave in the first place is because he tried to free them. So when he becomes a slave, you would think he would fight it because thats what he believes. But he looks as if he has given up in the 2nd chapter. The story sounds good and I would have loved to continue. But it seems Hound has accepted his fate and the rest of the story will be slow with nothing going for it. Though thank you for sharing. The start was good, but it was long chapters about nothing with a rushed relationship.

OH MY PRIMUS! This was the best slagging story I've read since 'Grab It By The Horns'!
You did an amazing job!
However I must ask, will there ever be a sequel?

This is the best story I've read in quite awhile. What is the related story of Ratchet and the Twins called?

It was so good I loved it!

Im almost crying... WHY WHY WHYYYYY! TC get back with Hound NOW! one of the rare occassions that i really hate Starscream, i do like the trine as a whole generally but this makes it so disgusting the way they have made Thundercracker into a murderer processor washing him... oh star you are going to suffer with megatron and shockwave...

Awesome ending! Loved the story!

Do you know what the title is for that Ratchet/Twins spin off?

Great job!

Eminnis

Wow. Just wow. I don't think I've ever seen such dedication, thought and raw talent put into one fic before. Your writing was incredible, the plot was exciting, and the romance was epic.

I can't express properly how much I love this fic. I don't come across writers like you very often, and it was such a pleasure to read this fic. Thank you so so so much.

That was a great ending. I really enjoyed everything you brought to this story. The drama was executed and worked out perfectly. The content was strong, detailed, and it really made me attached to the characters and root for their causes. Thank you for writing this, and thanks to your beta! You guys are the creators of my favorite fanfiction ever!

HEHEHE Hurrah! Happy days, loving the story even more every chapter, but I only have one left to go!

Daaawwww, Ratchet! teeheeee! I really enjoyed this chapter! Thanks for writing!

Holy cow! I was so anxious to get to the next chapter I almost forgot to review! This story has been great from the start and only keeps getting better! Thanks for writing it!

oh no oh no oh no! Great chapter! I just hope the next one is not full of bad news for the family!

daawww just use protection next time! Poor TC, I hope he does not miss out again.

HEHEHEHE XD YAY YAY YAY, but... oh geez can't a mech catch a break, one big event after another!