Reviews for Birth of a Devil
Ryu wolf chapter 8 . 2/4
Nice job with this chapter very well done
Rebmul chapter 8 . 9/27/2019
shame you don't write anymore oh well
Sage of the Azure Phoenix chapter 1 . 7/19/2018
Awesome fic man.
SephirothTrueHeartlessAngel chapter 8 . 7/18/2018
awesome story...I would like to see more
theshadowfirewolf chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
Pls update I love this story
Monster King chapter 8 . 8/14/2017
Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.
kat1017 chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
both the Senju and the Uzumaki clans are decendants of Ashura who was the second and youngest son of the Rikudo Sennin thus Naruto is a direct decendant of him, just as much as anyone who is of either the Senju or Uchia clans are.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
Oh please tell is not kakashi
draco7347 chapter 8 . 7/18/2015
please start a new chapter i hate suspense
Ballazan chapter 8 . 3/25/2015
Please update this story soon!
Neo-Devil chapter 3 . 11/8/2014
for Armor,when he is older, give Naruto the Armor of the God Emperor of Mankind(Warhammer 40k)
nich2710 chapter 6 . 9/26/2014
Hakureisaiga-Remind me to kill Ogre next time I see him. Seriously, my favorite character besides Law, King gets killed by that bastard.

I really hate to say it, but ogre did kill king.
The one currently in the game is called king 2 and was a kid at the orphanage the original king took care of. Basically he is the successor of king 1
Mirudin Makuraudo chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
Authors note in the flow of the story! INSTANT FAIL!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
Funny that Sarutobi seems to imply that Naruto is not labeled a missing-nin because he promises to return. It's not like he would anyway, because he is a civilian. The "nin" in "missing-nin" means ninja, so obviously no civilian can ever be a missing-nin.
WeberCode chapter 8 . 1/25/2014
sequel, please
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