J'aime quand tu regarde temari aurait pu être avec Naruto avec ce qu'il a fait pour son frère c'est un bon moyen de tomber amoureuse de lui, et je pense que beaucoup de filles sont tombés amoureuse de lui.

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I liked this but it was a bit short.

It was sweet and fluffy but I think it needs some work.

Some suggestions would be a paragraph or two

-explaining why she loves him.

-why Shika and her broke up.

-why Naruto loves her

-maybe one on Gaara talking with Temari.

I know this fic is like a year old, but I still liked it.

Maybe now you'll write a new one. :)

short and sweet-i liked it. it was good.

That was a very good of the best I might add

now that was a nice one

gust between u and me im starting 2 get tiered of some of these "romances" all it is is harriman's (multiple girlfriends) now tho they may be awsome and make naruto a god but it gets a little old after a while

good job :D

Except for needing a little more tenderness from Naruto prior to Temari's confession, this is a great little fic. _

Your Temari is good, btw. She talks the way I think of Temari talking, and acts like Temari, too. When I read her, I can hear her voice from the anime (Japanese version) in my head. To me that's a really good indication that your doing something right

Reminds me of me and my girlfriend in a sense actually...

nah, its just you have her jump immediately to naruto. who would help her, but not reciprocate her feelings right away.

sorry to agree with you man, but it does need work, could you consider Naruto/Matsuri for the next one? (Gaara's tundent)