Ahhh!
Fangirls!

A great story. Very well written.

But that was a great piece! Worth procrastinating on your other stories for a while. (At least to me. LOL) You might want to erase the "Parody" genre from the description of the story out there, though. I kept guessing that there would be a twist in the end! That would not have been so great on people who love suspense, would it? (But personally, I was glad that you warned me, in a way, because I am not included in that category of suspense-loving readers.)

Heheheh. Poor Glorfindel pursued by fan-girls... And those 'monsters' were varied too! I firstly thought it was the twins, then some weird cult (but not fan-girls)... then... well.

Huh? So Erestor had been sort of enchanted by the white-robed girl? I loved your description about her icy glare, by the way. It was hilarious in its hidden (or not so?) sarcasm! Thanks forsharing this piece.

- Rey

No need to apologize! This is one of the best Mary Sue Fanfics i've read! please continue!